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Grandmas Know

He was everything her daddy had warned her against, Before daddy left them for a young floozy. His black leather jacket enhanced his angriness. Everything about him made her a bit woozy. Stay away from that wild thing, her mother warned. When it came to her daughter, she was rather choosy. I’d snap that one up in a pink minute, Grandma said. He’s danger on a stick, a fascinating doozy!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/28/2018 5:10:00 PM
Sharp pen, Caren! That last line might just slay a dragon or two. Whew! ~ gw
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Date: 3/27/2018 12:07:00 AM
Hi Caren, The grandma in this story reminds me of one of my aunts. I agree "Grandma" knows. Well done:-) Alexis
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/27/2018 3:32:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis, I appreciate it.
Date: 3/26/2018 4:52:00 PM
Interesting work. Many opinions here and I wonder who was correct. Sara
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/27/2018 3:32:00 AM
In their own way, they are all correct, right Sara?
Date: 3/26/2018 4:11:00 PM
forget what mother says... Grandma knows best lol. What a fun poem Caren i do like your style:-) hugs jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/27/2018 3:33:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. I am having so much fun, reading such nice things. I do appreciate it!

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