Caren Krutsinger Poet Light Verse

Grandmas Know

He was everything her daddy had warned her against,
Before daddy left them for a young floozy.
His black leather jacket enhanced his angriness.
Everything about him made her a bit woozy.
Stay away from that wild thing, her mother warned.
When it came to her daughter, she was rather choosy.
I’d snap that one up in a pink minute, Grandma said.
He’s danger on a stick, a fascinating doozy!

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Gershon Wolf March 28, 2018 at 5:10 PM Sharp pen, Caren! That last line might just slay a dragon or two. Whew! ~ gw

Alexis Y. March 27, 2018 at 12:07 AM Hi Caren, The grandma in this story reminds me of one of my aunts. I agree "Grandma" knows. Well done:-) Alexis Caren Krutsinger March 27, 2018 at 3:32 AM Thank you, Alexis, I appreciate it.

Sara Kendrick March 26, 2018 at 4:52 PM Interesting work. Many opinions here and I wonder who was correct. Sara Caren Krutsinger March 27, 2018 at 3:32 AM In their own way, they are all correct, right Sara?

Jan Allison March 26, 2018 at 4:11 PM forget what mother says... Grandma knows best lol. What a fun poem Caren i do like your style:-) hugs jan xx Caren Krutsinger March 27, 2018 at 3:33 AM Thank you, Jan. I am having so much fun, reading such nice things. I do appreciate it!