Grandma Dalila

She is a funny fella, Grandma Dalila Played the sports kinect with a drink tequila Now posted in U-tube, has now 1089 hits Bet how funny she felt playing this!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 10:55 PM
Yes, I can see it reads better!! Glad I came back here to see, Dalila. I don't always keep names straight, but I'll try to remember you are the poet who wants to always know if her grammar is up to par and I'll try to watch for it for you! Luv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 9:06 PM
heehee,I am reading Debra's comment below. Everyone wondering who started the clerihew thing. It's funny. soupmail for ya
Agtani Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 11:16 PM
I finally edited this piece Andrea. Read it again!
Squyres Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 6:50 PM
Cute...laughing. Not sure what this clerihew is... but seems to be many on the soup.
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