9/27/2024 for Form J - Jueju Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France
Father Time, a grandpa now tells the same eternal yarns here comes heartbreak and first love there, a local boy makes good Grandpapa knows magic tricks clapping hands, the world stops still while she waits for Christmas day he waits to buy his first car snapping fingers, just like that sexy girl, athletic boy turned to elders, old and gray "pop" - a dream, and "poof" it's gone much has changed in the moment 'tween when we entered the world and soon, as we will depart Gramps Time - more magic tales
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