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9/27/2024 for Form J - Jueju Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

Father Time, a grandpa now tells the same eternal yarns here comes heartbreak and first love there, a local boy makes good Grandpapa knows magic tricks clapping hands, the world stops still while she waits for Christmas day he waits to buy his first car snapping fingers, just like that sexy girl, athletic boy turned to elders, old and gray "pop" - a dream, and "poof" it's gone much has changed in the moment 'tween when we entered the world and soon, as we will depart Gramps Time - more magic tales

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Date: 11/13/2024 12:01:00 PM
David, congrats on your win in my contest, like the poem, well done, blessings Constance
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David Crandall
Date: 11/13/2024 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Constance. I enjoy all of your contests!
Date: 10/20/2024 7:18:00 AM
I have read your work and am delighted to see it on the winner's list. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 10/20/2024 10:34:00 AM
Thanks Sara!
Date: 10/11/2024 10:47:00 PM
It is a beautiful bond- children playing with grand dad. Weave on dear poet. congratulations on your win.
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David Crandall
Date: 10/20/2024 10:34:00 AM
Thanks Thriveni!

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