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Grand-father

in billowing pipe smoke
he laughed like santa
then went to heaven

i was five



AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Perfect! This is exquisite!
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:03 PM
Thank you, Caren ~
Rone Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 10:39 AM
So love the smell of pipe smoke, from a well seasoned Kaywoodie.
Gauthier Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 1:19 PM
indeed ~ it's been a while
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