Grandfather

No doubt the way this poem should start
He was an iron man with a golden heart
I spent many days under a shade tree
Listening to how life used to be
Many days I spend fighting back the tears
For I shouldn't have wasted all those years
I swear if I could do it all over again
I would have listened more closely to him
I have no right as far I can see
To tell of the man who took care of me
Born in the days when men rode a horse
Like a river his life followed a course
A course that remained honest and true
Showed that real men are the things that they do
Raised his family and provided for his wife
A solid example of what matters in life
For his grandchildren he did more than his part
That’s why he's an Icon in all of our hearts
God blessed him far as I can see
For he could play beautiful music with a leaf off a tree
He held his family together his house was our home
No matter what path or how far we roamed
He was a farmer, Judge, barber and a poet
If we needed an answer no doubt he would know it
These days I use his memory I use it to see
The type of man I was meant to be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 10/8/2008 5:59:00 PM
I'm choked up. This is a beautiful dedication to your grandfather, and I know it came from your heart--cause its touching mine! Your talent is simply and utterly amazing--you are my inspiration and I pray that one day I will be as talented as you! God Bless You...Deb
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Date: 8/9/2008 3:53:00 PM
Such an awesome tribute. You paint such a clear picture. He would be proud of you. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/8/2008 3:51:00 PM
Another beautiful tribute. My grandfather died while I was away in the Navy. We were as close as you can get. I stilll think about him now and then. Thanks for sharing these tributes. Vince
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Date: 8/8/2008 6:34:00 AM
An inspiring tribute Michael. Never forget, you have become your own great man, and here lies proof you will live on in the hearts of your loved ones. Beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/8/2008 2:41:00 AM
sound of a man we should all strive to be
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Date: 8/8/2008 1:23:00 AM
As I said to James..we live on in the memories of our grankids Michael...the best epitaph to leave.Like both these poems full of reality.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 8/7/2008 9:38:00 PM
My grandfather used to say to me ... If you was a little dummer or a little smater I would be alright... I never new what that meant untill i sat behind bars in county ... then I figured out how to open up the electric doors.. I was too smart but was never taught on how to aply my self.. God Bless you and your family Bro...
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Date: 8/7/2008 1:29:00 PM
wow this was beautiful Michael, very touching to the deepest part of my heart, your grandfather sounded like a great man. i never knew my real grandfater, both of them died when i was very young. my grandmother remarried in 1943, the year i was born, so he became the only grandfather i knew. this was a great piece you wrote and thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/7/2008 12:20:00 PM
Oh - brilliant tribute, Michael! He is a rarity, not many real men around these days - just boys in big-boy suits. Awesome, Love Kristin
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Date: 8/7/2008 11:27:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute to a great man. Greatness comes in being a loving provider for him family....that out weighs fame or fortune...your poem reflects that! Thank you Michael, for the uplifting words that you use in all of your works, and also for the nice comments you make on my poetry. Your friend...Carrie
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