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Grandeur Of A Desert

The dust blows of Pharaohs’ legend which murmurs of tomb- rites unsaid; and through embers of a gas light my imaginings weave in threads. Giza’s desert touched by midnight, as pores recall ancient thoughts, I memorize mules roaming by while this grandeur leaves me distraught, for time rushes to steal a glee of journey ‘s end I can’t defy. In The Desert Contest: nette onclaud Leon Datu, 15 Sept 2014 10 lines

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Date: 9/22/2014 6:40:00 AM
Wonderful winner, congrats :)
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Date: 9/21/2014 3:58:00 PM
beautifully penned Leon many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2014 12:22:00 PM
- Leon, just came back to congratulate you on your win - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2014 10:26:00 AM
Congrats on a great write and a fine win!!
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Date: 9/21/2014 2:31:00 AM
Nicely done, congrats for the win
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Date: 9/21/2014 2:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Leon! Nicely done.
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:53:00 PM
Loved the imagery here leon, congrats
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Date: 9/20/2014 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved great win! Pandita
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Date: 9/20/2014 3:04:00 PM
i gush in the wonder of your word choices and mood, leon... beautiful!.. proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs
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Date: 9/20/2014 11:02:00 AM
Beautifully written Leon. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/20/2014 5:29:00 AM
Congrats on a great win, Leon
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Date: 9/16/2014 2:29:00 AM
- A journey of mystery desert - Great poem to the contest,Leon !! - I wish you good luck !! - // Anne-Lise :)
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