Grandchildren On Their Way

It is 3:18. The grandchildren are on their way.
I recognize that grandchildren feeling! 
My heart leaps as if we have gone down a giant roller coaster.
This anticipatory feeling could be described in 1426 ways,
Yet no missive – poem, story or song would do this feeling justice. 
Words have not yet been invented that describe the plethora of feelings
reserved for the children of your children. They are your heart, your world.
Ultimate joy, unconditional love, new emotions oozing out of every pore.
Until you have one of your own, there is no way to fully understand.
Words have not yet been invented or used in any haiku or senryu
to describe the unique feelings that parade through your mind
in two thousand and eighteen new ways as you see them head toward you.
If these fabulous feeling words do exist, grandparents are keeping them secret, just one more hidden pact to share only with their adorable grandchildren.
Darlings who are so perfect, they dazzle their grandparents’ hearts out.

Written 7-9-2020
Contest: Highest Number of Views
Sponsor: Funom Makama

Original Poem Title: Grandchildren Feeling
1426 Views
Poetry Form: Haiku (now I know it is actually a Senryu but I did not know it then)
Date Published: 03-18-2018
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:11 PM
This one gives soothing emotions Caren. Your affection for your lovely grandchildren pours in this muse. I loved reading it again and again. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Thank you very much my friend.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 4:12 PM
This is so beautiful Caren. I resonate most with this supearlitive Line. “They are your heart, your world.“. I loved this! Congratulations on your deserving podium win! Blessings xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 1:36 AM
Thank you Connie. I had no idea it was a win until now.
Watt Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Way to go Grandma Bear! Congrats on your podium win with your love poem to your grandchildren ~ John
Watt Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 5:51 PM
I love the nickname, Caren (I saw your reply to Ilene)! To my daughter, I am Papa Bear, and she is my Baby Bear. If she has children some day, I hope they will call me Grandpa Bear!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 1:36 AM
Hey! How did you know they call me Grandma Bear....oh ....Thanks John.
Makama Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 5:49 AM
Thank you so much for this great entry. Your high placement is well deserved.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 1:36 AM
Thank you so very much. I am humbly and honestly honored my friend.
Bauer Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 7:18 PM
i am a grandmother, so i know exactly what you are talking about, caren! you have nailed it!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 11, 2020 at 12:24 AM
Thank you Grandma Ilene. They call me Grandma Bear here because I am like a bear I guess?
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