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Grand Day

Grand day God's ray. Calm dawn fresh lawn. Blest morn bliss born. Sun bath work path. Zest roars faith soars. Great noon hopes croon. Toil best strength crest. Dusk gleam thanks beam. Grace gains praise reigns. Sweet peace woes cease. Love-filled pray'r-shield. Good night rest might. Sufficed in Christ.* *2 Corinthians 3:5 Not that we are sufficient of ourselves to think any thing as of ourselves; but our sufficiency is of God. March 31, 2022 6th place, "A BRIAN STRAND PREMIER CHOICE" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 3/31/2022.

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Date: 4/1/2022 12:56:00 PM
Truly a grand day! Congratulations, Beata!
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Date: 4/1/2022 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on win Beata, Outstanding poem. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 4/1/2022 9:36:00 AM
Beata, I love the movement from dawn to night in your footle and the way you showed progression in your formatting! Yes we are "sufficed in Christ!" This quite lovely. Congratulations and blessings!
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Date: 4/1/2022 1:10:00 AM
“Sufficed in Christ” ~ indeed, may Christ consciousness awake in every heart! Congrats on your win, with this beautiful poem, Beata
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Date: 3/31/2022 10:30:00 PM
Beautiful footle. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/31/2022 6:50:00 PM
A sure trophy winner! Masterfully done!
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Date: 3/31/2022 4:37:00 PM
Very nice, Beata! Flows well.
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Date: 3/31/2022 8:25:00 AM
Beata, you have taken this reader on a wonderful, blessed journey through a day, provided by the Lord. Last lines--favorites! Janice
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