Grand Dad's Healing Oil

~~~~~~~^^^^^~~~~~~


        Way back in year 1997 -
When curiosity seeks for answers
      When everything seems like a GAME
  When our BACKYARD be my Rendezvous...
           I'm still young in that very year
         Aged 4 - time for " playfulness " 
    There at the yard, grass nestled the loam soil
         Flowers blossom with a smile glimpsing on the golden daystar
               Birds sing with a lullaby together with the gust of the breeze
           Trees extinctly growing here in Philippines, seen
      -  I don't even know their English translation
            But it's not the point here. . .
       Once, oh that's not just once
           I think it's already my fifth time to be hurt
        Not by love - still very young for it.
             But by my own thing - being so CLUMSY
                             Playing hide-and-seek -
               Concealing in the Man-height Aromas
            Pretending not to be seen by anyone
        But that's for IMPOSSIBILITY..
              I've seen - and I ran from the place where I hid
                   To the Home Base to save myself
              But a 4-inched nail penetrate deep in my sole - feet
                     It felt like I'm dying in my very young age
                 Feeling of pain embraced me - seeking for a RELIEF...
            Like going Melted... Decaying - It really hurt a lot
                   Weeks passed by - 18 days to be exact
             Nothing heals my wound - except for my GRAND DAD'S HEALING OIL...
                              He's gone now, but the healing oil that keeps me alive
                Never been emptied in my HEART...
                                        Giving my second LIFE ---- ALMOST!



                                                                             ~~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^~~~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/16/2011 1:50:00 AM
Good old Grandad, the good oil had, he healed you truly then, yes thats what grandad's are for, much, many more than friend . good poetry mate, Don
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Date: 7/7/2011 10:40:00 PM
My brother is in the Philippines right now for a few months, for employment purposes. I hope he doesn't have this happen to him though :) I'm glad the oil worked.
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:56:00 AM
keep writing..very good.Beautiful...Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 7/3/2011 6:10:00 PM
I'm glad I came upon this great narrative write Jun-Jun! Enjoyed this reading very much. Beautiful memoirs.
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Date: 7/3/2011 6:10:00 PM
I'm glad I came upon this great narrative write Jun-Jun! Enjoyed this reading very much. Beautiful memoirs.
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