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Grand Canyon Is Waiting

My journey starts from the point where your neckline takes a sudden plunge, a path trodden so many times yet again becomes unfamiliar.. tip-toeing along those mountaneous curves I reach the top of it to conquer the peaks once again. Call of deep valley from below accompanied by your soft song makes me come down there, our sky is deep blue now with birds in their pleasure-fly. I must not stop here as I know below downwards the Grand Canyon is waiting, I must take a dip there.. reaching at the edge of it I listen to the wild beats of drums festival night is drawing closer.. and as I prepare to take a plunge I know another earth quake is awaiting... © 2011 kashinath karmakar ==========================

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Date: 8/25/2015 10:21:00 PM
Kash, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 8/25/2015 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations, sensual and romantically clever
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Date: 8/25/2015 4:09:00 PM
I saw what I wrote down below here. A number one forever. HOpe you will keep up with Soup even though you are rarely here any more. Keep these gems polished, Kash!! Congrats on a new win with this one.
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Date: 8/25/2015 2:38:00 AM
Wonderful write kash, a sweet romantic! Congrats on big win! Wish reading more of your poetry!
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Date: 8/24/2015 10:53:00 PM
Hi Kash, Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT
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Date: 7/18/2013 10:30:00 PM
Kash, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT
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Date: 7/15/2013 8:55:00 AM
Your write with natural beauty of love. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/14/2013 6:13:00 PM
awesome poem. SandyIvy
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Date: 7/14/2013 4:20:00 PM
wonderful! you've really nailed this one, kash! congrats!
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Date: 7/14/2013 2:19:00 PM
Nature never sounded more beautiful (or more erotic!) Happy to see you've survived another earthquake Kash..Congrats - Tim
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Date: 7/14/2013 11:36:00 AM
A great congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:09:00 AM
Hi kash it seems a deep affair scripted as a beautiful poem.This one really moved me great, awesome, really great
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:07:00 AM
well of course THIS should be a number one forever!!! Congrats, my friend, on this awesome win.
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:01:00 AM
Kash. stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/5/2012 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any Poem" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 6:14:00 PM
KASH, A LATE CONGRATS ON MY ANY POEM GOES CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT
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Date: 9/3/2012 12:06:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win with this sensual and super romantic write, Kash! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 9/2/2012 10:07:00 PM
congrats Kash on another fabulous write and win luv ..
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Date: 9/1/2012 12:05:00 PM
kash, congrats on your nice little win,, always~PD
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Date: 9/1/2012 12:22:00 AM
excellen t extended metaphor technique and great fun t o read...I enjoyed it immensely...best wishes ..Syd
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Date: 8/31/2012 1:25:00 PM
A golden write from the Karmakar archives! Congrats on its continued success! Love it! gwendolen
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Date: 11/7/2011 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem You Posted this Week"contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/6/2011 8:28:00 AM
Congrats, Kash. Excellent write. Nice going. Kudos. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 11/6/2011 8:24:00 AM
Kash, tis grate to see an unfamilar name at the top of the list...Many congratulations for on your top win....and best of wishes for success for many successes in the future. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/6/2011 6:48:00 AM
congrats on your win!!
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