Grand Canyon Is Waiting

My journey starts from the point where your neckline takes a sudden plunge, a path trodden so many times yet again becomes unfamiliar.. tip-toeing along those mountaneous curves I reach the top of it to conquer the peaks once again. Call of deep valley from below accompanied by your soft song makes me come down there, our sky is deep blue now with birds in their pleasure-fly. I must not stop here as I know below downwards the Grand Canyon is waiting, I must take a dip there.. reaching at the edge of it I listen to the wild beats of drums festival night is drawing closer.. and as I prepare to take a plunge I know another earth quake is awaiting... © 2011 kashinath karmakar ==========================
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Y. Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 10:21 PM
Kash, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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August 25, 2015 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations, sensual and romantically clever
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 4:09 PM
I saw what I wrote down below here. A number one forever. HOpe you will keep up with Soup even though you are rarely here any more. Keep these gems polished, Kash!! Congrats on a new win with this one.
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August 25, 2015 at 2:38 AM
Wonderful write kash, a sweet romantic! Congrats on big win! Wish reading more of your poetry!
A  Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 10:53 PM
Hi Kash, Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT
A  Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 10:30 PM
Kash, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT
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July 15, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Your write with natural beauty of love. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Ivy D Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 6:13 PM
awesome poem. SandyIvy
Bauer Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 4:20 PM
wonderful! you've really nailed this one, kash! congrats!
Ryerson Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 2:19 PM
Nature never sounded more beautiful (or more erotic!) Happy to see you've survived another earthquake Kash..Congrats - Tim
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July 14, 2013 at 11:36 AM
A great congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl
Undertaker Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 12:09 AM
Hi kash it seems a deep affair scripted as a beautiful poem.This one really moved me great, awesome, really great
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 12:07 AM
well of course THIS should be a number one forever!!! Congrats, my friend, on this awesome win.
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July 14, 2013 at 12:01 AM
Kash. stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA
Brown Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any Poem" contest Kash. Love, Carol
A  Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 6:14 PM
KASH, A LATE CONGRATS ON MY ANY POEM GOES CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT
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September 3, 2012 at 12:06 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win with this sensual and super romantic write, Kash! Hugs, Rhonda
Sweetheart Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 10:07 PM
congrats Kash on another fabulous write and win luv ..
A   Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 12:05 PM
kash, congrats on your nice little win,, always~PD
Beck Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 12:22 AM
excellen t extended metaphor technique and great fun t o read...I enjoyed it immensely...best wishes ..Syd
Song Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 1:25 PM
A golden write from the Karmakar archives! Congrats on its continued success! Love it! gwendolen
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Any Poem You Posted this Week"contest Kash. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 8:28 AM
Congrats, Kash. Excellent write. Nice going. Kudos. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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November 6, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Kash, tis grate to see an unfamilar name at the top of the list...Many congratulations for on your top win....and best of wishes for success for many successes in the future. Agape, Moses
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November 6, 2011 at 6:48 AM
congrats on your win!!
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