Granada

Within these apartment walls 
Depression looms, 
Permeates, destroys. 
Its sterile white walls 
Are oppressive,
Even claustrophobic.
Silverfish slither 
Across white ceilings, 
I pray they don’t drop 
Into my mouth
As I sleep.

I lay on my roll out sofa,
Praying that the foul odor, 
Is just my neighbor’s 
Trash laden home,
And not my neighbor.
Last time I saw him
He was wraithlike
I haven’t seen him lately.

I tried everything, 
To brake 
This prison’s hold,
But all was lost… 
The ceiling caved-in.
Nothing but rafters 
And roaches above.
This dark and dingy tenement 
The west side slums.

I hide
Behind closed drapes,
So no one can see 
My despair.
My head sinks low,
And my tears fall 
To my feet 
And bathes, 
Another bug.

A hairy caterpillar inches
Across my naked white toes.
As desperate as I am,
To escape this ruin.

I watch as it climbs, 
The edge of the curtains
Until it disappears,
Behind the drapes
And out the broken window.

With a silent prayer,
I follow it,
And peel back, 
Mold encrusted blinds,
Letting in an eruption of light,
Like the strike of a match.
It burns right through me,
Searing depression 
From my body,
With rays of Divine Mercy.

My eyes adjust 
There in front of me 
Life is magnified.

Orange colored blossoms 
Shining in the sun 
As delicate as gossamer.
Leaves in a warm summer breeze
Glowing from within
As they danced their praises.
The tiny caterpillar 
Reared his forelegs, 
He laughed at the spectacle,
And flirted with a butterfly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 3, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Andrea. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2010 at 2:47 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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May 8, 2010 at 2:04 PM
Congrats on being featured. Great poem. I write poems like that as a sort of note to myself, to give myself prompts as to what's going on and that I need to improve my life, or whatever. While this is a good, heart felt poem, it paints a sad picture. Good luck and keep sharing. Tony
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May 3, 2010 at 8:54 PM
Thanks everyone! sad thing though Everyone found out before me! lol
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May 3, 2010 at 7:09 PM
Congratulations Anderia on your worthy poem feature this seek. Agape, Moses
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May 3, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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May 3, 2010 at 4:20 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Andrea. Love,Carol
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December 31, 2009 at 3:06 PM
~~Andrea~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol
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