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Graffiti Spider

We roamed the village in our masks -
a store-bought 1960’s plastic with string.
To trick and treat for candy, our task.
The bagful, we’d try to eat the whole thing.

We roam the village, as Dad hands out candy,
but soon runs out thus shutting out the light.
There is mischief night, its modus operandi -
four letter words scrawled on the door - a slight.

Door to door, most give hand-out of sweets
but one is pointed out - it is pitch dark
“They don’t celebrate.” A curiosity I greet.
God knows my path - there is a spark.

The Halloween parade was a hit with cider
and donuts - my dad reminds me …
but I remember the thankless graffiti spider
and the Holy Spirit fire that set me free.

10/25/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Delaney Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 1:54 PM
Great Halloween poem, Kim: love the title and that tricky grafitti spider . So creative. SuZ
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 2:35 PM
Thank you, Suzanne!
Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:17 PM
'the thankless grafitti spider' - talk about creativity. That phrase is way up there in the stratosphere, says me.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 5:25 AM
Thanks so much!!
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 1:13 PM
- Halloween, something we didn't know about in my childhood :) - Great written, Kim :) - If it's for contest ... I wish you good luck :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 1:30 PM
No contest. Just sharing my experience.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:04 AM
Brilliant verse, Kim. Loved it. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 1:31 PM
Thanks, Victor! xx
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