Graduating From the School of Hard Knocks

1 Knocked to the Ground

There’s no bell, nor stars—
just bloody knees.
You haven’t thought of heaven or hell,
when you cursed the sneeze.

2 Ignoring the Obvious Cause

Using a whisk
to dust off the hole in your knees.
You’re a bigg’n
who straightens your back,
though your neck won’t 
calibrate left, right or South.

3 Whoops

Why’d you fall on your whoopie
cushion? Tailbone thrashing
like a mermaid against the current.
Baleen curses - two-fisted.

4 Slowmo Recovery

No ambulance for your pride.
You scrutinize your shoes
for blubber, crap and scars.

5 Apex

The spreader was keen,
intelligent, even.
Theory of climbing
impeccable
but without horseshoes
and cheating
on your tippy-tippy toes
your nose meets
the grindstone of regret.

6 Watering the Grounds

The soil needs warm earth
and worms but they tend
to be off put by church.
Nothing learned…nothing gained.

7 Angels on High

Potluck’s not for you
but the scent of savory,
sweet and scrupulous
tantalizes.

8 Nest Egg

Wash yolk off your face.
Smile it’s sunny.
Tripping - tongue
says,”Oh my goodness.”
You chuckle
as you take a big bite
out of new life.

10/7/2021

To put off your old self, which belongs to your former manner of life and is corrupt through deceitful desires, and to be renewed in the spirit of your minds, and to put on the new self, created after the likeness of God in true righteousness and holiness. Eph 4:22-24 ESV

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Date: 10/7/2021 1:45:00 PM
I cannot get the line "No ambulance for your pride" out of my mind. And why would I want to. It's brilliant! Kudos, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2021 1:54:00 PM
Thank you so much ~ hugs, Kim
Date: 10/7/2021 11:12:00 AM
So much fun! "The spreader was keen, intelligent, even. Theory of climbing impeccable but without horseshoes and cheating on your tippy-tippy toes your nose meets the grindstone of regret." I really liked this part Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2021 12:20:00 PM
Thanks so much xx
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