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Gracefully Aged

Lines of attraction gather around your face, as your lips lift like an amusement ride. Dips and dimples elude learned grace and your forehead foldings coincide. Deep rooted paths, like travelled lands show erupted islands of warm sunspots golden upon your useful hands, tough but tender like dried apricots. Your dove-like spirit is eager to listen with childlike eyes, renewed and restored, springing forth with mercy's glisten, mirroring an image of your walk with the Lord.

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Date: 10/13/2019 10:35:00 PM
Love the line about dried apricots, such a touching tribute to wisdom!
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Date: 9/28/2019 8:59:00 AM
Every walk of life is beautiful in its own way. Nicely done :)
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 9/28/2019 5:13:00 PM
Yes, life is precious.
Date: 9/27/2019 9:01:00 PM
You make aging sound so beautiful!!
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 9/28/2019 5:12:00 PM
People either get bitter or better with aging. Some people just seem to radiate the joy of the Lord even more as they age and it's so attractive.
Date: 9/27/2019 9:01:00 PM
the ad above this box shows two old women and one looks really beautiful, like your poem.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 9/28/2019 5:09:00 PM
Perfect timing.

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