Graceful Swans

Graceful swans from ugly ducklings come ~ Please give the laggards more than a crumb

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/3/2022 9:50:00 PM

You're absolutely right. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Let us all be our own beholders. Quack, quack, just like yourself and don't look back.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/19/2022 3:43:00 AM

Smirking and smiling,loving this one.

Valsa George

Date: 7/17/2022 10:34:00 PM

Much wisdom in this observation ! Don't judge anyone or anything in haste, wait to see what they eventually will turn into.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/17/2022 9:09:00 AM

So true, gw. When looking at the youngsters (particularly these days) we tend to shake our heads in disbelief. We do from experience know that most of them will turn out just fine. And some will excel beyond our wildest imaginations.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2022 8:11:00 PM

You're right! It's amazing how kids turn things around as they mature.