Graceful Paws

glossy coat gleaming beneath the star studded skies shining in moonlight

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/13/2022 9:30:00 AM

A fun write that tells a story in a few words. Love It. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/6/2022 11:47:00 AM

Gina, you have captured the magic of moonlight glinting off a black cat's "glossy coat." Wonderful writing. Best wishes if you are entering this in the contest. Blessing my friend!

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/5/2022 4:55:00 PM

This is so cute! I once had a black cat a decade ago...She used to stay in a canopy waiting for us when we were out until evening. This haiku reminds me of her...Great haiku! All the best in the contest.