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Graceful Exit

no more footprint   I am flying now





12/26/18

The Last Line Poetry Contest
Silent One

Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2018

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February 11, 2019 at 9:42 PM

Simple aerodynamics. Like my snow angel with her feet on the ground. I love the simplicity of your lines. Very tight. Never telling... the outcome. Release your mind with the first few lines and then WHAM. Gottcha.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 12, 2019 at 9:57 AM

I like that :) Thank you Jeff! xomo

Mahtab Bangalee

January 20, 2019 at 9:33 PM

flying; but not escaping certainly!

January 16, 2019 at 6:38 PM

Great one liner Maureen and congrat's on the win, take care......Vera

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 17, 2019 at 8:28 AM

Thank you Vera! A lovely day to you my friend :) xomo

January 5, 2019 at 2:15 PM

P.S. Congrats on your win too.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 6, 2019 at 8:17 AM

Thank you! :) xomo

January 5, 2019 at 2:13 PM

This is so clever.

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 5, 2019 at 1:33 PM

Hello Maureen, oh...wow! Have a nice day my friend. hugs.Have a nice day my friend.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 6, 2019 at 8:17 AM

Thank you hugs! :)) xomo

January 5, 2019 at 12:57 PM

Nice!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

January 6, 2019 at 8:17 AM

:))

December 31, 2018 at 12:30 AM

It amazes me how so much can be said with such few words.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 31, 2018 at 8:50 AM

I try ;) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

December 30, 2018 at 3:09 PM

wowie, if he had given an actual first place where there was ONE true winner, this is the one I would dub as IT!!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 31, 2018 at 8:49 AM

Giggles ;p Thank You Andrea! Been amusedly observing the conversation ;) New Year HUGS! xomo <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 30, 2018 at 1:18 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Maureen :) - Best wishes for the new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 31, 2018 at 8:37 AM

Thank you! :)) All the best to you with the New Year! xomo

December 30, 2018 at 9:55 AM

Congratulations for #11 on the Best New Poems List :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 31, 2018 at 8:34 AM

Thank you! :))) xomo!

December 30, 2018 at 8:53 AM

Superbly succinct and exceptional. Love both your title and your thoughtful monoku, Mo. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes for a happy new year, lovely.. ~Susan

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 31, 2018 at 8:33 AM

Thank you so much Susan! Happy New Year blessings to you love! xomo <3

December 29, 2018 at 11:36 PM

May I Peter Pan the sky with you? Have you the dust? Love your monoku and truly would love to fly as I do in my dreams. Get your soar on, girl! All the best ... CayCay

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2018 at 8:02 AM

Giggles ;) Thank you CayCay! xomo

December 29, 2018 at 11:01 PM

I came back because your words make us all fly!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2018 at 8:00 AM

You are sweet, thank you! :)) xomo

December 29, 2018 at 4:22 PM

I love this! Congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2018 at 7:59 AM

Thank you! :)) xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

December 29, 2018 at 3:48 PM

This was my personal favorite of all the entries, many congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2018 at 7:58 AM

Wow thank you!! :)) xomo!

December 29, 2018 at 11:57 AM

Nicely done, Maureen. I like the sound of flying away into a new life , a new chapter. Good luck in the contest. May your new year be very blessed. Hugs Eve~`*

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2018 at 7:56 AM

Thank you! Hugs & love xomo!

December 29, 2018 at 10:48 AM

A fine brevity. Congrats on your top win!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2018 at 7:53 AM

Thank you Moon Flower :) xomo!

Carolyn Devonshire

December 29, 2018 at 9:59 AM

Truly worthy of a top win, Maureen. So powerful!! Congratulations.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2018 at 7:52 AM

Thank you Carolyn! :)) xomo!

December 29, 2018 at 7:58 AM

Congratulations for your great win! :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2018 at 7:50 AM

Thank you Heidi! :) xomo!

December 29, 2018 at 7:48 AM

Hi Maureen, You said much in this one-liner. Great job. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2018 at 7:49 AM

Thank you Alexis :)) xomo!

December 29, 2018 at 6:22 AM

If you stop for a moment, and take this in, think about it.. It is a brilliant one liner! Simple words, with such a deep meaning.. Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your first place in the one liner contest..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 29, 2018 at 7:39 AM

Thank you so much! For that and poking my muse ;) All the best to you and yours in the New Year my friend, xomo!

December 28, 2018 at 3:40 PM

I had to "fav" this Monoku. Well done.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 29, 2018 at 7:36 AM

Thank you M.L.! :)) xomo!

December 28, 2018 at 3:25 PM

Wonderful monoku Mo...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 29, 2018 at 7:35 AM

Thank you Joseph :) xomo!

December 28, 2018 at 5:59 AM

Love! Very cool...earthbound to glory

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 28, 2018 at 8:05 AM

Ooh I love that. Thank you! :) xomo

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