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Graceful Exit

no more footprint   I am flying now





12/26/18

The Last Line Poetry Contest
Silent One

deathenvironmentmemonoku

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 2/11/2019 9:42:00 PM

Simple aerodynamics. Like my snow angel with her feet on the ground. I love the simplicity of your lines. Very tight. Never telling... the outcome. Release your mind with the first few lines and then WHAM. Gottcha.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 2/12/2019 9:57:00 AM

I like that :) Thank you Jeff! xomo

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/20/2019 9:33:00 PM

flying; but not escaping certainly!

Vera Duggan

Date: 1/16/2019 6:38:00 PM

Great one liner Maureen and congrat's on the win, take care......Vera

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/17/2019 8:28:00 AM

Thank you Vera! A lovely day to you my friend :) xomo

Carole Duet

Date: 1/5/2019 2:15:00 PM

P.S. Congrats on your win too.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/6/2019 8:17:00 AM

Thank you! :) xomo

Carole Duet

Date: 1/5/2019 2:13:00 PM

This is so clever.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/5/2019 1:33:00 PM

Hello Maureen, oh...wow! Have a nice day my friend. hugs.Have a nice day my friend.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/6/2019 8:17:00 AM

Thank you hugs! :)) xomo

Mike Hauser

Date: 1/5/2019 12:57:00 PM

Nice!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/6/2019 8:17:00 AM

:))

Bobby May

Date: 12/31/2018 12:30:00 AM

It amazes me how so much can be said with such few words.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/31/2018 8:50:00 AM

I try ;) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2018 3:09:00 PM

wowie, if he had given an actual first place where there was ONE true winner, this is the one I would dub as IT!!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/31/2018 8:49:00 AM

Giggles ;p Thank You Andrea! Been amusedly observing the conversation ;) New Year HUGS! xomo <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2018 1:18:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Maureen :) - Best wishes for the new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/31/2018 8:37:00 AM

Thank you! :)) All the best to you with the New Year! xomo

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/30/2018 9:55:00 AM

Congratulations for #11 on the Best New Poems List :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/31/2018 8:34:00 AM

Thank you! :))) xomo!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/30/2018 8:53:00 AM

Superbly succinct and exceptional. Love both your title and your thoughtful monoku, Mo. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes for a happy new year, lovely.. ~Susan

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/31/2018 8:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan! Happy New Year blessings to you love! xomo <3

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/29/2018 11:36:00 PM

May I Peter Pan the sky with you? Have you the dust? Love your monoku and truly would love to fly as I do in my dreams. Get your soar on, girl! All the best ... CayCay

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2018 8:02:00 AM

Giggles ;) Thank you CayCay! xomo

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/29/2018 11:01:00 PM

I came back because your words make us all fly!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2018 8:00:00 AM

You are sweet, thank you! :)) xomo

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/29/2018 4:22:00 PM

I love this! Congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2018 7:59:00 AM

Thank you! :)) xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/29/2018 3:48:00 PM

This was my personal favorite of all the entries, many congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2018 7:58:00 AM

Wow thank you!! :)) xomo!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/29/2018 11:57:00 AM

Nicely done, Maureen. I like the sound of flying away into a new life , a new chapter. Good luck in the contest. May your new year be very blessed. Hugs Eve~`*

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2018 7:56:00 AM

Thank you! Hugs & love xomo!

Moon Flower

Date: 12/29/2018 10:48:00 AM

A fine brevity. Congrats on your top win!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2018 7:53:00 AM

Thank you Moon Flower :) xomo!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/29/2018 9:59:00 AM

Truly worthy of a top win, Maureen. So powerful!! Congratulations.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2018 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn! :)) xomo!

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/29/2018 7:58:00 AM

Congratulations for your great win! :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2018 7:50:00 AM

Thank you Heidi! :) xomo!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/29/2018 7:48:00 AM

Hi Maureen, You said much in this one-liner. Great job. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/30/2018 7:49:00 AM

Thank you Alexis :)) xomo!

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2018 6:22:00 AM

If you stop for a moment, and take this in, think about it.. It is a brilliant one liner! Simple words, with such a deep meaning.. Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your first place in the one liner contest..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/29/2018 7:39:00 AM

Thank you so much! For that and poking my muse ;) All the best to you and yours in the New Year my friend, xomo!