Grace In the Sky

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Written on September 12, 2023

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Sizzling on the cerulean skyline Twilight lingers, eternally singing Contemplating this must be God’s headline Lighting the soul with the joy He’s bringing Twilight lingers, eternally singing Laughing at the night, tempting glow of moon Lighting the soul with the joy He’s bringing Lifting hearts with wonders to make one swoon Laughing at the night, tempting glow of moon Melodies rain sighs from the setting sun Lifting hearts with wonders to make one swoon Reflections of gentle from which hope’s spun Melodies rain sighs from the setting sun Aching for the silence of night falling Reflections of gentle from which hope’s spun Sunset brings tender grace so enthralling Aching for the silence of night falling Contemplating this must be God’s headline Sunset brings tender grace so enthralling Sizzling on the cerulean skyline

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/12/2023 6:22:00 PM

I give you a standing ovation for this masterful Pantoum. Sunsets are as mesmerizing as the rhythmic flow of your words.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/12/2023 2:21:00 AM

This is a mesmerizing and very magical pantoum, sequined with majestic lines that shimmer in the beauty and grace of His presence. "Sizzling on the cerulean skyline", " God's headline " Every element of nature is a work of art, especially illustrated by the Almighty. Your wordplay, rhythm and creative imagery here.. Everything is so enchanting and beyond beautiful! Love this so much, dear Gina :)