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Gourmand--Tet

Gourmand - TET Sight Smells Good Tastes good too Let me touch it My four senses all like the beef jerky My fifth sense hears the complaints of my choice What do I care it's sole food old shoes choose Tetractys This Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina April 25, 2019

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/7/2019 4:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/18/2019 9:08:00 PM

carpe diem done over

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/7/2019 7:08:00 PM

Thank you, Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2019 2:36:00 PM

so quirky this is. Sole food. Love that!!

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2019 9:13:00 AM

Hi Ralph, I enjoyed reading your humorous write. You did well in the Tetractys form. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/18/2019 9:09:00 PM

carpe diem done over

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2019 8:21:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 5/4/2019 7:37:00 AM

Love this humorous write, Ralph. Congratulations on your win my friend. Charlie

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/4/2019 7:44:00 AM

Thank you for the placement, Charles. By the way, speaking of your last name, my father was born in Messina, Sicily, Italy

Judy Ball

Date: 4/30/2019 1:33:00 AM

A fun and clever write Ralph. I'm not very good with forms. Really like this though. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/28/2019 12:32:00 PM

A clever creation for this contest Ralph. I loved it! : )

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/27/2019 4:18:00 PM

'Sole food' Very witty

Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/28/2019 8:23:00 AM

Hi Allen: Thank you. I like to instill humor in many of my poems

Joseph May

Date: 4/26/2019 8:30:00 PM

I like the 'sole food' line...Very nicely done Ralph..

Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/27/2019 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph As a kid , it used to taste like that.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/26/2019 8:23:00 PM

Good one, Ralph. Janice

Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/27/2019 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, Janice

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/26/2019 6:40:00 PM

A very well penned tetractys; good luck in the contest.

Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/28/2019 7:28:00 AM

hank you, M.L.

Ralph Sergi
Date: 4/28/2019 7:28:00 AM

Thank you, M.L.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/26/2019 5:32:00 PM

Very creative, Ralph, my boys would love this.. I am not a jerky person , but my husband was and my children are.. Grandpa Roper use to make it out of deer and elk .. good luck in the contest. hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2019 5:12:00 PM

oh how fun. Maybe I should do one on food too!!!