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Gourmand--Tet

Gourmand - TET

Sight
Smells Good
Tastes good too
Let me touch it
My four senses all like the beef jerky

My fifth sense hears the complaints of my choice
What do I care
it's sole food
old shoes
choose

Tetractys This Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina
April 25, 2019

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Eve Roper Date: 5/7/2019 4:11:00 PM Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve Login to Reply Ralph Sergi Date: 5/18/2019 9:08:00 PM carpe diem done over Ralph Sergi Date: 5/7/2019 7:08:00 PM Thank you, Eve

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/4/2019 2:36:00 PM so quirky this is. Sole food. Love that!! Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 5/4/2019 9:13:00 AM Hi Ralph, I enjoyed reading your humorous write. You did well in the Tetractys form. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis Login to Reply Ralph Sergi Date: 5/18/2019 9:09:00 PM carpe diem done over

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/4/2019 8:21:00 AM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 5/4/2019 7:37:00 AM Love this humorous write, Ralph. Congratulations on your win my friend. Charlie Login to Reply Ralph Sergi Date: 5/4/2019 7:44:00 AM Thank you for the placement, Charles. By the way, speaking of your last name, my father was born in Messina, Sicily, Italy

Judy Ball Date: 4/30/2019 1:33:00 AM A fun and clever write Ralph. I'm not very good with forms. Really like this though. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/28/2019 12:32:00 PM A clever creation for this contest Ralph. I loved it! : ) Login to Reply

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 4/27/2019 4:18:00 PM 'Sole food' Very witty Login to Reply Ralph Sergi Date: 4/28/2019 8:23:00 AM Hi Allen: Thank you. I like to instill humor in many of my poems

Joseph May Date: 4/26/2019 8:30:00 PM I like the 'sole food' line...Very nicely done Ralph.. Login to Reply Ralph Sergi Date: 4/27/2019 7:48:00 AM Thank you, Joseph As a kid , it used to taste like that.

Janice Canerdy Date: 4/26/2019 8:23:00 PM Good one, Ralph. Janice Login to Reply Ralph Sergi Date: 4/27/2019 7:48:00 AM Thank you, Janice

M. L. Kiser Date: 4/26/2019 6:40:00 PM A very well penned tetractys; good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Ralph Sergi Date: 4/28/2019 7:28:00 AM hank you, M.L. Ralph Sergi Date: 4/28/2019 7:28:00 AM Thank you, M.L.

Eve Roper Date: 4/26/2019 5:32:00 PM Very creative, Ralph, my boys would love this.. I am not a jerky person , but my husband was and my children are.. Grandpa Roper use to make it out of deer and elk .. good luck in the contest. hugs eve Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/26/2019 5:12:00 PM oh how fun. Maybe I should do one on food too!!! Login to Reply