Gourd-Geous

funny little gourds
slightly ugly and bumpy
— adopted by me

10/15/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Kim, your children are gourd-geous!... Love that title, and the haiku too! ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 9:53 PM
Thanks, Gerahon!
Onclaud Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 2:10 PM
there is something appealing about gourds; you saw that, ohh... lovely offering, kim..huggs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Thanks so much, Nette! <3 Kim
Faulkner Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Possibly one of the best titles ever - getting close to jack-o-lantern time!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 3:40 PM
That would also be a lovely title “jack-o-lantern time” Thank you, Michelle! :)
Kiser Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 3:45 PM
I love the: "slightly ugly and bumpy"; line; great pen.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:03 PM
Thanks, M.L.!
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October 16, 2018 at 10:36 AM
I had to look back at the title after reading Susan's comment. Well done, Kim. Very autumn-like!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:03 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Stebbings Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Have not tried on of these yet, Kim. You have inspired me to have a go. // Barry
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:00 PM
Hope so! Thanks, Barry!
Green Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 9:22 AM
They are funny looking but your poem is so cute, who would even notice? :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 4:58 PM
For sure! Thanks, Chris!
Krampe Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 6:51 AM
I love this little gourds, Kim. Have fun :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 4:58 PM
Thanks, dear Agnes!
Ashley Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 10:09 PM
Kim, I absolutely love your title and your amazing haiku.. Each line builds in delight. Lovely! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 10:13 PM
Thanks so much, Susan! :)
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