Gotta Do Something

I feel like writing some material

To see if it's for real

Desperation setting in

Knocking me out like at the beginning

Trespassing, on the intrusive messaging

Who am I fooling ?

If only my thoughts were elusive

Maybe then I wouldn't be so exclusive

Should not stop my verses,

Can't handle these curses

Like my passion for hot nurses

Who ain't got 10 purses

I breathe eventually and recap on my story,

From point A to point B

Yoyo-ing through the commotion

Of accepting that you know you may know nothing

Confusing? That's my thing

Who wants to over complicate?

Not me mate.

I've been talking for a while now

Like I took a vow

To keep up the beat

And make it hit it deep;
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 3:42 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 4:44 AM
I agree with Andrea it is penned in a rap form - great rhyme Stefan:-) hugs Jan xx
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February 20, 2017 at 1:11 AM
TY Jan
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 5:06 PM
I enjoyed this one. It felt a bit rappish!! (I made that word up. Rappy?? ) Thanks for visiting my poetry.
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July 26, 2016 at 2:07 AM
Ty Andrea. :) Much appreciated. You know what we can make it a word lol.
A   Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 10:11 PM
Stefan, good to see you boosting poetry. LINDA
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July 7, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Quite the compliment! Thx
Hamilton Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 9:55 AM
When poetry sounds like rap...all that's missing is the beat. a little non- sensical but fun to read.
A  Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 6:47 AM
To write is to write, I like this honest form you took. Skat
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July 7, 2016 at 10:36 PM
ty
Smith Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 6:41 AM
Like the freestyling mate.
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July 7, 2016 at 10:36 PM
thx mate
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