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Gotta Carry That Weight

Every gosh darn morning I draw water from the well Not having indoor plumbing has proven to be hell If ever I find a way to afford it, that would be swell I'm annoyed with carrying the buckets. Can you tell? Lowering the thing is easy because it's so light I'm chilly on Winter morns, even when the sun is bright It's been the main reason for many a marital fight Especially if more water is needed during the night The hubs declared that it should be woman's work His chauvinistic attitude shows that he's a jerk He's a bit lazy at chores, and finds reasons to shirk Sometimes he makes me so mad that I go berserk! Usually, I can't carry the water without making a splash He said he would do it for me... if I paid him in cash His relentless sarcasm is nothing more than balderdash! The rudeness is so irritating that he's given me a rash!
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August 6, 2026 at 7:44 AM
Gosh this is piercing in many ways but still has that sarcastic touch of humour! 🤌🙀 I really don't like such chauvinism too! The rudeness and patriarchal behaviour gets on my nerves lol, thank God haven't witnessed any of that . Your word-pairings and the flow of lines really left me in stitches though somehow.. especially that ending "The rudeness is so irritating that he's given me a rash!" Ah that would make anyone go berserk lol! Water is such a necessity! What a clever write, dear Lin! You amaze me everytime! Such a versatile poetess you are! Can write on any theme.. woahh ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥✨💫🌹 Sending you starlight and mermaid-love always 💫🧜‍♀️🐚🌊💫
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August 6, 2026 at 8:00 AM
Bwahahahaha just what one shud expect after refusing to help in such cases! Hope he finds peace in the well lol, plenty of water there. Love that swift kick 😭😂 u are amazing!
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August 6, 2026 at 7:55 AM
Thanks so much for your supportive comments, Hiya. I'm so very honored by your compliments. I felt like writing a titch of something humorous for a change today. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I think I'd have tossed him into the well at some point BEFORE I got the rash. He needed more than a swift kick on his backside!
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