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Gothic Storm

GOTHIC STORM Gothic storm across the heavens, splitting the sky in two creating a rip in the fabric of the sky into which the earth will fall, doomed and dead into the abyss of time forever more. We are the generation of the damned, condemned to be this for the rest of our lives until we die, by our own hand or that of Old Father Time or of our enemies, stalking us across the chapters of the universe, never ending. The seas of time used to be on our side but now the hour glass has tilted and we slide effortlessly downwards, to our end and that of all that meant something to us, now nothing but ashes and dust, not even a folk memory remains as we cease to exist, become nothing but a storm in the rift of time that is the world, an idea of what might have been, ending now…

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Date: 12/5/2015 3:52:00 AM
thanx every1 on your best regards on my poem :)
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Date: 12/5/2015 3:40:00 AM
Wonderful poem and win nick ... big congrats!
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:52:00 PM
Nick A Jimmy, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:19:00 PM
Nick, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/4/2015 8:37:00 AM
thanx all. @skat it gives me chance to be competitive with other top poets and is fun :)
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Date: 8/4/2015 1:34:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write nick!
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Date: 8/2/2015 11:55:00 PM
Nick Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
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Date: 11/30/2014 11:06:00 AM
from the late 90s. glad you like it. im not into fancy stuff like metaphors. i just write as i see/feel it :)
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:00:00 AM
This is what I like Nick, a poem so deep, I got to reach in every line, and make out the few metaphors hidden in some lines :). I like the stalking across time line. Enjoyed, SKAT
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