Gothic Storm

GOTHIC STORM

Gothic storm across the heavens, splitting 
the sky in two creating a rip in the fabric 
of the sky into which the earth will fall, 
doomed and dead into the abyss of time 
forever more. We are the generation of the damned, 
condemned to be this for the rest of our lives 
until we die, by our own hand 
or that of Old Father Time or of our enemies, 
stalking us across the chapters of the universe, 
never ending. The seas of time used to be on our side 
but now the hour glass has tilted and we slide 
effortlessly downwards, to our end 
and that of all that meant something to us, 
now nothing but ashes and dust, 
not even a folk memory remains as we cease 
to exist, become nothing but a storm in the rift 
of time that is the world, an idea of what might have been, 
ending now…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jimmy Boom Semtex Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 3:52 AM
thanx every1 on your best regards on my poem :)
A. Sharma Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 3:40 AM
Wonderful poem and win nick ... big congrats!
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December 4, 2015 at 11:52 PM
Nick A Jimmy, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT
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December 4, 2015 at 11:19 PM
Nick, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~
Jimmy Boom Semtex Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 8:37 AM
thanx all. @skat it gives me chance to be competitive with other top poets and is fun :)
A. Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 1:34 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write nick!
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August 2, 2015 at 11:55 PM
Nick Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
Jimmy Boom Semtex Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 11:06 AM
from the late 90s. glad you like it. im not into fancy stuff like metaphors. i just write as i see/feel it :)
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November 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is what I like Nick, a poem so deep, I got to reach in every line, and make out the few metaphors hidden in some lines :). I like the stalking across time line. Enjoyed, SKAT
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