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Written, July 30, 2025
For The Contest, “Gotcha!"
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Tingly skies full of surprise- oh how I love when with surmise, the little rascal aims his dart as if it were, poetic art. Like magic, when he pulls his bow, two hearts then tether in love's glow. His arrow binds them then as one to spin beneath the lover's sun as special feelings grow and flow. This happened when I was eighteen. It started with a friendship scene, yet soon dear Cupid's arrow struck! Now sixty-seven years of luck still makes our love together gleam. When cupid's arrow aims for you, there isn't much that you can do !
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Legros Kelley Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 2:02 AM
This is adorable, I love it so much! A fave for sure <3
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 4:58 PM
So fun! I met my valentine on Valentine’s Day…didn’t have a chance ;)
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 3:23 PM
what a wonderful testament of your love - 67 years together is a remarkable achievement! hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 3:26 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for your visit and lovely comment! Hugs, Sandra
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