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7/25/2025 for GOTCHA Poetry Contest sponsored by Mystic Rose

Tingly skies full of surprise oh how I love when I surmise, the little rascal aims his dart as if it were, poetic art! Nobody knows where it might hit, but rest assured, in seconds split, that mischief maker's dart will pierce an unsuspecting heart. With his freshly sharpened tool, our lover boy creates a silly fool, but, if his arrow punctures you, know his aim is pure and true. This angel's wish, you must abide. Forget your pride. Enjoy the ride! When cupid's arrow aims for you, there isn't much that you can do!

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Date: 7/25/2025 4:54:00 PM
now this is truly clever and in rhyme. I'm duly impressed. best wishes with the contest, enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 7/25/2025 11:40:00 AM
What a cute "Gotcha" write. "Good Luck" Watch out for his arrows. Hahaha!!! We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away..................
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