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Gossip

Gossip can be opulent, dramatic in display But often it's the subtle ways, penumbra shadows play Crepuscular whispers fall through cracks, and dims the light of day Jealousy brings misery, discord can cloud the air A friendship, fraught with cynical flair, assures the boundary's blurred Desultory words can fray the seams, and rip apart visceral dreams Halcyon ease is not achieved when exuberant rumors bring a tear Have our friendships passed the test of time, or have sonorous rumblings shattered glass? Do gossip mongers walk on ice? These are questions we must ask
____________________________________________________________ 1/30/16 (Speak No Evil) Submitted for contest: "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" Sponsored by Silent One (10 word challenge... Crepuscular, Desultory, Exuberant, Halcyon, Visceral, Cynical, Sonorous, Penumbra, Opulent, Jealousy)
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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Brilliant sharing.
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten-word challenge WIN!" Love LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 12:32 PM
you always bring the best dish-out, carrie.. sweet congrats and huggs!
A  Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your ten-word challenge WIN. ** SKAT **
Lane Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 10:05 AM
You made many good points, Carrie. Congratulations for this one.
Inman Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Carrie, unique interpretation of the theme, well written and great word usage.
Gentry Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 1:36 AM
Congratulations! Great job in this contest.
Dillard Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Nice job as always! And for the record, gossip is a grenade of nuclear proportion!
Scars Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Carrie..Congrats on your placement! *Smiles* -luloo
Andresen Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 1:55 PM
- Carrie, this is very well written and so true .............. I give you one 7 for the gossip !:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Richards Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 2:01 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words, Anne-Lise !! Hugs!
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