Jenna Logan Poet Verse

Gossamer Snare

In pale dawn light, when dew drops glisten,
I listen to a chorus of larks as they chatter.
Scattered about my garden, lilies are in bloom.
Perfumed petals varnished by the fulgent sun.
Spun, is a tangled web between the leaves,
as a busy spider weaves a gossamer snare.



October 11, 2022  
Bitesize Poem No. 53
A contest by Line Gauthier

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Caren Krutsinger October 21, 2022 at 2:20 AM Ahhhhhhhh This poem is zen; Line will adore it! I do too. Jenna Logan October 21, 2022 at 8:11 AM Thanks, Caren. I'm glad you liked it. Line N/A'd it.

Brian Sambourne October 19, 2022 at 5:01 PM Your verse poem Jenna, creates a grand garden image. From larks to spiders, you cover song + predatory waiting. Delightful! Best wishes, Brian Jenna Logan October 20, 2022 at 6:56 AM Thank you ever so much, Brian. I'm glad you found it to your liking.

Unseeking Seeker October 13, 2022 at 7:04 AM Wow! I really like the way this is penned, both vibrant beauty and impending death entwined in actuality and potentiality on nature’s diverse canvas Jenna Logan October 20, 2022 at 6:56 AM Thank you so very much for your thoughts, Seeker.

L Milton Hankins October 12, 2022 at 8:45 AM Nicely written, Jenna. Certainly should receive notice in Line's contest. Jenna Logan October 20, 2022 at 6:54 AM It's enough that you and others have acclaimed its merit. Thanks, Milt.

John Lawless October 11, 2022 at 4:27 PM very nicely woven Jenna.....ok...ok...but I just had to go there......paints a beautiful picture of nature's beauty and brutality. Jenna Logan October 12, 2022 at 7:11 AM Thank you for such kind thoughts, and the pun, too, John. I would've gone there, too!

Arlo Parker October 11, 2022 at 10:33 AM Another lyrical gem, Miss Jenna. (oops, just Jenna). ~;o) Jenna Logan October 12, 2022 at 7:13 AM Thank you very much, Arlo. You would think a poetry site would not be an atmosphere in which they'd like to hang out. This one is a return visitor with revenge on his mind when he should be apologizing to lots of people instead of continuing to harass them. Arlo Parker October 11, 2022 at 2:36 PM I got the drift but now the offender's comments are gone. Trolls seem so out of place in the desired serenity of PS. Pity. :o) Jenna Logan October 11, 2022 at 1:49 PM Thanks so much for your sentiments, Arlo. btw... Milt's blog was about a troll who appears under fake names in order to harass certain poets, like a buzzing mosquito.

Jeff Kyser October 11, 2022 at 10:15 AM very nice image in such a few lines, well done, Jenna Jenna Logan October 11, 2022 at 1:48 PM Thanks for swinging by with such nice remarks, jeff.

Tom Cunningham October 11, 2022 at 7:12 AM It's that time of year when you can see their amazing artwork, bet flies wouldn't agree though ol. Good luck in the contest Jenna. Tom Jenna Logan October 11, 2022 at 7:22 AM You’d win that bet. Thanks so much, Tom.

Becky Forbes October 11, 2022 at 6:52 AM So good... "gossamer square" is so clever! Jenna Logan October 11, 2022 at 7:44 AM :) Becky Forbes October 11, 2022 at 7:27 AM HA! oops... that's what I meant to type. :-) Jenna Logan October 11, 2022 at 7:21 AM Thanks but it’s snare.