Gossamer Love in the Mist

Written: May 31, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Line Gauthier 1st place contest winner ****************** Fiery orange sparks fade out to strip the day, showing a vessel of velvet in eerie, flirty ballet. Night stares and dances under cosmic skies; She winks, giggles, and lifts her starry eyes. Her crescent lips cast shadows on the haze, glinting with love to assess my adoring gaze.
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Guptar Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your top win inn this contest with a lovely poem on night under cosmic skies. So full of beautiful imagery , ending on a superb delightful note. Wishing you a delightful weekend.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 11:32 PM
Great imagery! Congrats on top win, Lasaad!
Jones Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 8:20 AM
Love this “ Night stares and dances under cosmic skies; She winks, giggles, and lifts her starry eyes” really enjoyed the creative beautiful imagery Sotto’s! Congratulations on your most deserved top win!
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 7:55 PM
I like your personification of night as winking with starry eyes and dancing ; cute image. Line 4, i would keep in present tense and it would sound perfect. Very pretty, Sotto.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 9:47 AM
Favorite line: Her crescent lips cast shadows on the haze
Vaso Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 2:02 AM
When I come to read your poems I know is always beautiful but also soothing!
Hind Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 12:14 AM
gorgeous writing, :)
George Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 9:47 PM
Simply lovely. A dazzling description of the night sky in beautiful rhyme. I am sure this will be in the winners list.
Rolland Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 4:43 PM
this is brilliant , images are great, so inspiring moment, thanks poet Sotto
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