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GOSSAMER DREAMS

Asleep, breathing cheerful dreams ~ Ethereal fragility; Gossamer hallucinations igniting jocund, kaleidoscopic luminescence; Magical night-time observations, projecting quirky reflections; Smoky tableau ushering versatile waves, x-rays yielding zenith.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2025 9:22:00 AM

Awesome. And big congrats

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/30/2025 9:29:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your write again. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/28/2025 11:58:00 AM

I like this, Jo! You did a masterful job herding words into lovely images! I hope this did well in the contest! Warm blessings of joy to you for this inspiring poem!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/27/2025 12:39:00 PM

You made your "GOSSAMER DREAMS" write look so easy. I had a problem doing this ABC poem. "Good Luck" Have a fun day as you write away..................

Charles Messina

Date: 1/27/2025 8:43:00 AM

Wow! This is amazing, Jo! I think I've only tried writing an ABC poem once, and that was any 6 letters (lol) If this is for the contest...best wishes! Charlie

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/27/2025 1:41:00 AM

Perfect ABC poem. Best for a win.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/26/2025 7:31:00 PM

Joanna, your wonderful poem delves into the ethereal and fleeting nature of dreams and the otherworldly phenomena that transpire when one is asleep.