Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Gorgeous Eyes

Was mesmerized at Starbucks ordering a coffee
The sweetie behind the counter made my knees all wobbly
With eyes so exquisite
Definitely quite feministic
Blown away describes me went totally bonky

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Eileen Manassian May 29, 2018 at 3:11 PM Oh Kenny....You are a naughty boy. Just like always. Don't be bewitched by those pretty eyes. Hugs from Betty Boop. Jack Ellison May 29, 2018 at 3:48 PM Totally out of control! Told her at the risk of sounding like a dirty old man!!! She blushed! Tons of love from Happy Kenny!!! XOXOX

Darlene De Beaulieu May 29, 2018 at 2:52 PM Hello Jack,gorgeous eyes ah..yes. Some men have those gorgeous eyes. Have a nice day my friend. xxxx-oooo. Jack Ellison May 29, 2018 at 3:52 PM When I told her she said, "yours too"... I turned violet!!! LOL Lovsies, Happy Jack XOX

Tom Cunningham May 29, 2018 at 12:19 PM Did you keep the cup that she wrote your name on. Jack Ellison May 29, 2018 at 1:15 PM Yes but also have become a coffeeholic for some strange reason!!! LOL

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 29, 2018 at 7:52 AM Starstruck at Starbucks :) xomo! Jack Ellison May 29, 2018 at 8:21 AM LOVE your response dearest MO!!! CLEVER as usual!!! Love from the west, Jacko!!! XOXOX