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Gorgeous After Sight

Enriched by God* with well-being’s delight Graceful physique basks in wondrous health glow Heart greets hello to gorgeous “after” sight Welcoming new look of blest body show. Graceful physique basks in wondrous health glow Thankful midst rigorous exercise pain Welcoming new look of blest body show Since muscles worked for ideal weight gain. Thankful midst rigorous exercise pain Heart greets hello to gorgeous “after” sight Since muscles worked for ideal weight gain Enriched by God with well-being’s delight.
*2Corinthians 9:11 Being enriched in every thing to all bountifulness, which causeth through us thanksgiving to God. July 21, 2021 3rd place, "Pantoum Rhyme 1" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 8/13/2021.

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Date: 8/17/2021 11:00:00 AM
Wonderful insights Beata. The dreaded exercise and the results we love. Congratulations for your win. Blessings dear friend! Think I will go look for my barbells. I feel an attack of flab coming on!
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Date: 8/16/2021 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations, Beata. Great work! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 8/16/2021 9:24:00 AM
Great Work. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/13/2021 8:45:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/22/2021 4:27:00 PM
gorgeous and TASTY!!! It is the french fry picture I hope??
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Date: 7/22/2021 1:04:00 AM
Very nicely done, Beata, love the "after" sight:)
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Date: 7/21/2021 9:29:00 PM
Beata, Physique's best in show in a bristling Pantoum. -Richard
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Date: 7/21/2021 5:54:00 AM
Very nice! Those muscles way more but oh the health glow…the “after” sight!
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