Beata Agustin Poet Pantoum

Gorgeous After Sight

Enriched by God* with well-being’s delight
Graceful physique basks in wondrous health glow
Heart greets hello to gorgeous “after” sight
Welcoming new look of blest body show.

Graceful physique basks in wondrous health glow
Thankful midst rigorous exercise pain
Welcoming new look of blest body show
Since muscles worked for ideal weight gain.

Thankful midst rigorous exercise pain
Heart greets hello to gorgeous “after” sight
Since muscles worked for ideal weight gain
Enriched by God with well-being’s delight.

*2Corinthians 9:11 Being enriched in every thing to all bountifulness, which causeth through us thanksgiving to God.

July 21, 2021
3rd place, "Pantoum Rhyme 1" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 8/13/2021.

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Sam Kauffman August 17, 2021 at 11:00 AM Wonderful insights Beata. The dreaded exercise and the results we love. Congratulations for your win. Blessings dear friend! Think I will go look for my barbells. I feel an attack of flab coming on!

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 16, 2021 at 2:43 PM Congratulations, Beata. Great work! Love ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex August 16, 2021 at 9:24 AM Great Work. Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper August 13, 2021 at 8:45 PM Beata, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2021 at 4:27 PM gorgeous and TASTY!!! It is the french fry picture I hope??

Joanna Daniel July 22, 2021 at 1:04 AM Very nicely done, Beata, love the "after" sight:)

Quoth Theraven July 21, 2021 at 9:29 PM Beata, Physique's best in show in a bristling Pantoum. -Richard

Kim Rodrigues July 21, 2021 at 5:54 AM Very nice! Those muscles way more but oh the health glow…the “after” sight!