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Goofball Named Larvin

There once was a goofball named Larvin He lived on a race track in Marchin. he laughed like a big goat, With a sore, coughy throat, That scared all the kids in Ak-Sar-Ben

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 2/15/2018 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Line. I am so glad you think so because my 7th grade band teacher told my mother "she cannot even clap on rhythm," but I did not care. My name is Caren, but it is a form of Carmen, so I do not mind.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/15/2018 1:57:00 AM
My third grade music teacher called my parents and said, 'get CayCay out of my class, she is tone deaf.' Worse, my son's babybook: for first sentence the brat gave me this, "Mama, don't sing." It may be 'cause I'm tired, but I don't understand "AK SAR BEN", but it isn't the first time I've been left out of something other Soupers get! CayCay
Date: 2/15/2018 12:39:00 PM
Cute limerick. Good rhythm, Carmen.
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