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goody goody gum drop more than sweets may mean a lot ate a gum drop just popped it in rolled around let it spin left and right hugged my cheeks swashed about then repeats savor the juice sugary delight tickles tongue this tiny bite stuck to teeth once it's in while i smiled big green grin might not be a better thing than this except a warm sloshy kiss 80 words Rhyme 9/22/22 Colored pencil illustration G. Gaul

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Date: 11/21/2022 10:25:00 PM
A great rhyme, indeed! Congratulations!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/22/2022 5:06:00 AM
Your kind comment is most appreciated.
Date: 11/21/2022 8:19:00 PM
Greg, thank you for entering the contest. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you and yours. Hugs Eve
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/22/2022 5:05:00 AM
Eve, thanks for your comment and read. Especially respect your hosting.
Date: 9/24/2022 2:24:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your delightful poetic description of the tasty gum drop. Fun one indeed. Thanks for the smile. Cheers Anne :-)
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Greg Gaul
Date: 9/24/2022 3:49:00 PM
Clever of you like this touch of silliness. Thanks so much.

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