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goodbye time to fly

I know now That I must fly But I got to get thru A needle's eye It’s going to be tight But I must try If I’m ever going to get to fly Some say Just get by Take it easy So you won’t die It’s very hard But if you must try Squeezing thru a needle's eye I don’t Know just why Can’t let it be Or even try To understand When you can’t fly The pain of the other guy And that I must fly And get thru A needle's eye It’s going to be hard But I think it’s time To say goodbye and fly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/20/2015 2:37:00 PM
Quite a fan of the short lines and lots of rhymes. There are so many ways it could be applied by the reader, too.
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 1/21/2015 8:03:00 AM
thank you, I do try to write for anyone troubled in some way,
Date: 1/19/2015 4:55:00 PM
Oh to fly, to touch the heavenly sky, the blue hews of seamless beyond, in this work of wonderous inflextions let your imagination soar child of light, thank you for your comment on my broken doll poem and I look forward to reading more of your enlightened work, cheri
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 1/21/2015 8:02:00 AM
thank you , it was fun writing this one, it just flew onto the paper lol:)
Date: 1/17/2015 12:21:00 PM
It is well written with cleaver imagery and powerful emotions that whisper their feelings off the page and into your heart. Emile.
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 1/18/2015 7:02:00 AM
thank you, you are always so kind