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Goodbye school days

A hot tear is burning my eye For jolly school days start to fly Leaving me lone in a dark way And lovely friends will be away Can my heart say goodbye?! And let my soul about to die Without you I'll be as hay And to fast days an easy prey I will miss you- the shining sky With no help or even supply Yet our school days will be my ray That gives a hand on a dark day Never I'll lose you-my eye Nor your shine can I ever deny Like boats we may sail away But we will anchor in our home bay Written by (Mr. Sherif) With my best wishes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/27/2015 1:45:00 AM
Sherif, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/27/2015 9:35:00 PM
Thanks for your interest and congratulations and I hope to be a great poet like you.
Date: 6/6/2015 4:08:00 AM
Who or what is "my eye" in your poem? I enjoyed your poem but wasn't sure I understood it!
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Date: 6/6/2015 4:51:00 AM
I wrote the poem in the tongue of one of my students who is about to miss his friends and he is comparing them to his eye and the shining sky.
Date: 6/4/2015 11:21:00 PM
Sherif, that's one of the deepest ways in describing the end of school days. :), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/5/2015 6:38:00 PM
Thanks for commenting and approving my poem. I am sure that I will benefit alot from being among poets like you.
Date: 5/30/2015 11:55:00 AM
Back here again, SHERIF , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 5/30/2015 4:45:00 PM
I'm only a new budding in a leafy flower whose fragrance attracts many bees all over the world to produce their sweet words and faithful emotions. Truely, I am an Egyptian English teacher and I've started to write my poems in English to improve my English and to share my feelings with great poets like you. '' Yours" " Sherif"
Date: 5/30/2015 12:22:00 AM
'and to fast days an easy prey' - what a great line. Terrific verse, Mr Sherif. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy your stay here. Regards, Viv
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sherif goda
Date: 5/30/2015 4:39:00 PM
Thanks for commenting positively on my poem and of course I'm really glad to be among great poets like you. Regards, Sherif
Date: 5/28/2015 8:44:00 PM
That is a touching poem, ending school days.
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Date: 5/29/2015 5:30:00 PM
Thanks for approving my poem
Date: 5/28/2015 7:55:00 PM
Best Poem for saying farewell for school year
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