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Goodbye School Days

A hot tear is burning my eye
For jolly school days start to fly
Leaving me lone in a dark way
And lovely friends will be away

Can my heart say goodbye?!
And let my soul about to die
Without you I'll be as hay
And to fast days an easy prey 

I will miss you- the shining sky
With no help or even supply
Yet our school days will be my ray
That gives a hand on a dark day

Never I'll lose you-my eye
Nor your shine can I ever deny 
Like boats we may sail away
But we will anchor in our home bay

Written by (Mr. Sherif) 
With my best wishes

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Skat A

June 27, 2015 at 1:45 AM

Sherif, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love

Sherif Goda

June 27, 2015 at 9:35 PM

Thanks for your interest and congratulations and I hope to be a great poet like you.

Ayesha Karim

June 6, 2015 at 4:08 AM

Who or what is "my eye" in your poem? I enjoyed your poem but wasn't sure I understood it!

Sherif Goda

June 6, 2015 at 4:51 AM

I wrote the poem in the tongue of one of my students who is about to miss his friends and he is comparing them to his eye and the shining sky.

Poet Destroyer A

June 4, 2015 at 11:21 PM

Sherif, that's one of the deepest ways in describing the end of school days. :), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sherif Goda

June 5, 2015 at 6:38 PM

Thanks for commenting and approving my poem. I am sure that I will benefit alot from being among poets like you.

Skat A

May 30, 2015 at 11:55 AM

Back here again, SHERIF , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Sherif Goda

May 30, 2015 at 4:45 PM

I'm only a new budding in a leafy flower whose fragrance attracts many bees all over the world to produce their sweet words and faithful emotions. Truely, I am an Egyptian English teacher and I've started to write my poems in English to improve my English and to share my feelings with great poets like you. '' Yours" " Sherif"