Goodbye Ray

Ray Ventre
even Loved by me,
his smallest acquaintance.
Want the ow to go away, want to 
go to last Thursday,
To see his joy
Again.
Ray was my teacher
On Thursdays, four to six
He taught patterns and continuity
Of the literary past, EN 281.
A big name for the
Enjoyment of
Literature.
He died Wednesday,
The day before Thanksgiving
Two thousand fourteen.
Many are sad,
I too, am
Sad.
Rate my professor
Rated him a four point eight,
Good, even great, but read what 
all students said for him
to know his rank,
to know our loss 
to know our sad.

I was a late addition to Northern Michigan University
I had planned another year at community college, but
a job opened up for my wife in Marquette, so I suddenly needed, two weeks before they started: 
classes, guidance, a mentor, I needed someone to care about a situation they never heard of till now.
Ray Ventre was the head of the English department, Ray cared, he set me up with classes including 281.
A more enjoyable class would be hard to find.
A more enjoyable teacher, impossible.
To find.
The joy he had
The special kind
That never fades, but grows
Like cancer of the heart
Spreading into all 
Who Love
laugh
And live for 
The happiest days.
His heart was
Too large to last.
Goodbye Ray, and thank you for teaching me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaso Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:40 PM
Great dedication/tribute, Its heartwarming to know of all the people that gave and touched other peoples lives.
Helppi Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 9:17 PM
It sure makes the world a more hopeful place when we remember the good people in it. Thanks for reading about Ray.
Dunn Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 6:26 PM
I just lost a friend myself just a few days ago, so I can feel your heat felt pain in these lines, your friend would have loved this tribute I'm sure, cheri Thanks again for your cool comments have a good night
Helppi Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 7:51 PM
Losing people is sad, but we are happy with their memories. The little pieces they leave of themselves for us to see. We see these so clearly at times, and they bring back that loved one for that moment. Peace to you Cherl.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 4:01 PM
So sorry to hear this Dan. I am sure he knows and appreciates this beautiful tribute.
Helppi Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 10:59 AM
I feel you are right that he does know. Thanks for reading Brenda.
Hicks Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 12:26 PM
Sincere and heartfelt dedication. I can see he meant a lot to you. It's amazing how some people have that special gift to move others around them - in both small and large ways, they all add up.
Helppi Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 10:58 AM
Ray certainly had a special gift, he was a special gift to students here at Northern. He was a great guy. Thanks for reading.
Fraser Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Fine tribute Dan to a teacher who's had a massive impact in your life. I think he'd smile widely reading this, James......
Helppi Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 10:43 AM
James, so nice of you to say, thank you for reading.
Chircop Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Some people come in our lives and leave their hearts printed on our own.Some people pass on to the better life,yet through their kind gestures and loving spirits they remain with us.Their memory We cherish and hold. An outstanding tribute!!
Helppi Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 10:41 AM
Ray was certainly kind and he sure had a loving spirit, I wish he were still here, I just got an e-mail from his replacement for the 281 class, and she is just as devastated as everyone, Ray's persona was everywhere on campus, many will cherish and hold his memory. Thanks for reading.
Gibson Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 9:13 AM
Great tribute to your teacher and mentor, Dan. Those teachers never fade from our memories; they are a part of us for life.
Helppi Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Faye, I do so hope Ray never fades from my memory because he was like Jack E. here on this site...always so joyful! I aspire to someday teach like him, if I can do this, I will have succeeded.
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 10:51 PM
OH MY, that poor guy taken from you all. I am curious. did he die of cancer? I saw a reference to cancer but the poem does not exactly say. (I"ve been collecting cancer poems, that is why I ask, and this is a very good one) A wonderful tribute.
Helppi Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 7:39 AM
No, he died of a sudden heart attack, the cancer reference was just to show how insidiously his joy spread. He had a rare, fierce passion for teaching, and the joy this brought him shined onto all of his students. His lectures were loud with laughter, and he laughed at our humorous contributions to discussions. He was a gem. Thanks for reading.
Bear Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 9:32 PM
How lovely to write so nicely about a man who sounds like someone very special Be blessed that you had the time that you had with this man and remember him fondly and live up to his expectations of you. He is now guiding from above. Blessings and hugs Edith
Helppi Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 7:32 AM
Yes Edith, I do wish to honor his expectations and I do truly believe he is guiding from above. Thanks for reading.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 2:45 PM
So sorry for your loss and that of his family. I hope you shared this tribute with them. I am moved by your offering.
Helppi Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 4:27 PM
The loss is indeed great, to the entire Marquette community, Ray was loved by all. He stood for helping others as much as he was able. There are no negative comments at all on his "rate my professor" page, and he had so many duties to perform as the department head, how he found time for so many student's needs is aweing. Thanks for reading.
Meade Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:50 PM
a beautiful mentor and a great example for all of us. Nicely done
Helppi Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 4:17 PM
Thanks David, Ray was indeed a mentor, he was fine and in his usual good humor on Thursday last. He always made us students laugh and our last class was no exception, we laughed lots and learned at the same time, he truly was one of the greatest teachers I have known. Thanks for reading.
Andresen Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:39 PM
- So sad to lose a good friend - R.I.P. Ray - Well written but sad, Dan - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Helppi Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Ray was a very sweet person, so helpful as a Professor, and precious as a friend. I still have three more classes of his that he will no longer teach, and the English department has lost its leader. Thanks for reading.
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