Goodbye Pain

The homeless man's worldly possessions were laid as a bevel against the curb. He rests his head against his backpack using it as leverage to keep himself upright. His drinking and drug use has landed him in this sinkhole of psychosis over the years.

You may think him a derelict but there is still a fragment of resolution for a better life left in his soul. He hangs onto the illusion that he can change his life and save himself as he injects the heroine into his bulging vein.

Goodbye pain.

Eight Word Challenge Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann
5/31/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sergi Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 4:19 PM
You evoked a pitiful prose that caused a reaction in my brain. This sure looks like a winner! I wish you good luck!
Mcguire Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 3:25 PM
Thanks Ralph
Vangaveti Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 6:25 AM
The ending is not expected. Great write !!!
Mcguire Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 11:42 PM
Thank you Swetha!
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 8:58 PM
Wow, Timothy. You certainly exceeded the challenge here with this most touching poem.
Mcguire Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 10:07 PM
Thank you FRIEND!
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