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Goodbye Nana -Haiku triplet-

Sea foam wash my feet: Let me sink into the earth My heels then my toes Gentle breeze kiss me So I may feel your majesty, Whisper in my ear Hands held on the shore She holds me as the sea comes- I love you Nana

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Date: 1/6/2016 5:51:00 PM
thank you for reading one of my favorite poems. I know it is not a haiku by definition, but rather a series of three Haiku. Creating a single thought, theses three stanzas still feel like a Haiku...to me.
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