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Written, March 28, 2023

Poetry/Personification/Goodbye Old Girl
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1535-585-28
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

What Happens to Bonded Cats When One Dies? - Pet Funeral Homes

Goodbye My Old Girl


          my name is Snuggles Kitty 
and I live in a Victorian apartment building
with my human mother and elderly Smudges Cat
Smudges is very old and sometime forgets to clean her face
                   so, I do that for her 

    one morning mother got the cat carrier out
               (I really hate that thing)
    anyways, she put my old girl inside and left
       I wanted to yell ... bring her back, please
    and when mother came home that carrier was empty

          and mother was weeping and weeping
              I did not understand at first
                  and I tried my best to comfort her
                          finally, I searched for old Smudges everywhere

     then, I knew ... my old girl had crossed the rainbow bridge                 
         ( I wonder, did mother know that I was weeping too)

I rolled myself up in my blanket for three days
     and refused to drink or eat 
                           until mother said in her big voice
Snuggles that is enough ...  I don't want to lose you too

             mother left me on the bed under my blanket
                        until I came looking for her
                   I ate  and drank
                         and cuddled with mother purring loudly

we are coming to terms with living without our precious Smudges
         though, the end of grieving may be far away
                   we still have each other
               
                Smudges is buried in the garden 
                    in the shade of a tree
     it is the spot she loved ... a rock marks her grave
and in every season we leave her flowers
              and, everyday we leave tears for our old girl
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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 3:37 PM
Hello Constance, Constance it is hard to lose a pet. the lady has the other cat for company. Love & Friendship/Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:11 PM
Hello Constance, my cats name is Sparkles. We are very close she sleeps with me and we play bat the shoelace. the only game she enjoys. We are together 1 year and 1 month. Love &Friendship /Darlene\
La France Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 9:48 AM
Darlene, thank you for the the comment, yes, losing a beloved pet is very painful, the lady is me, the story is true and Snuggles is my sweet cat !
Kaufman Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 12:56 PM
Oh. this is very touching and hit home with me as I had to put my brown tiger and friend Joshua down last December. It is such a hard thing to lose one of your fur babies. I still look for him when I come home. He was so warm and cuddly. May time and fond memories heal the void his absence left in your lives.
La France Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Nancy, thank you so much for the comment and compassion, I can see that you understand this pain that never leaves !
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