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Goodbye My Love

G etting up to leave you is very hard
Only you can stop me my darling
Or you can let me walk out that door
Did you find the letter that I wrote you?
Baby my heart is breaking and
You must know I love you, you're my
Everything but I need more, goodbye




09-28-16
Contest: Goodbye
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/19/2016 10:46:00 AM

Very compelling acrostic poem, Alexis. The angst and determination are a powerful combo of emotions. A heart divided is classic Greek tragedy. Beautifully written and expressed. Much love from the RW. (Romantic Warrior)

Umeikia Whiting

Date: 10/1/2016 7:45:00 PM

I love it

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/30/2016 11:10:00 PM

This is a great acrostic and country song!!! Loved it!

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/29/2016 7:06:00 PM

A very short Acrostic that says so much, Alexis. Well done, and congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars

Date: 9/29/2016 9:05:00 AM

so sad but beautiful acrostic Alexis...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/29/2016 10:24:00 AM

Hi Laura, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you came by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/29/2016 8:12:00 AM

A 7 for this well-written , touching, WINNING acrostic, Alexis! Janice

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/29/2016 10:26:00 AM

Hi Janice, Thanks for the nice comment and the high mark as well. I appreciate that you stopped by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 9/29/2016 7:26:00 AM

Congratulations Alexis on the placement of the contest. A letter can convey a lot of emotions that cannot be expressed in words.

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/29/2016 10:20:00 AM

Hi Nayda, Thank you so much for my placement. It was my pleasure to participate in your contest:-) Alexis

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/29/2016 1:02:00 AM

The last line is pregnant ... Congratulations on your win ...

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/29/2016 10:22:00 AM

Hi Probir, I appreciate that you came by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2016 12:05:00 AM

Great win I see. BIG congratulations to you, sweetie.

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/29/2016 10:28:00 AM

Hi Andrea, It's so good to see you. I appreciate your kindness and your support. Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/28/2016 11:40:00 PM

Indeed very sad...why is there goobyes...OMG! so painful. Well penned. Congrats :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/29/2016 10:36:00 AM

Hi Sunita, Goobyes are sad. Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 9/28/2016 5:25:00 PM

Very sad poem, Alexis, good luck in the contest. :) Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/29/2016 10:38:00 AM

Hi Eve, Sometimes relationships don't work out. And the only choice you have is to say goodbye. I appreciate that you stopped by to wish me luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/28/2016 2:33:00 PM

Sadness transpires in this fine Acrostic I will wait for an Acrostic entitled "Welcome My Love" Good lack dear Alexis. I do not worry for it is not real! Beautifully done!

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/29/2016 10:31:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, It's so good to see you my friend. I Want to see that title too! I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/28/2016 12:59:00 PM

- Many "Goodbye" poems today - Goodbye makes me sad ..... I always cry, Alexis - A great poem - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/29/2016 10:40:00 AM

Hi Anne- Lise, Goodbyes make me sad too. Thanks for coming by to wish me luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/28/2016 10:14:00 AM

Great acrostic, Alexis. One way love affairs are extremely difficult on the one doing the giving. It's hard enough when both are in love. Impossible, any other way. Good luck in contest:)

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/29/2016 10:42:00 AM

Hi Daniel, Thank you so much. A relationship that's "one way" is destined to fail. I appreciate that you stopped by to wish me luck in the contest:-) Alexis