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Goodbye My Love

Cannot please thee not if he stays The key does turn

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 5:13:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/13/2011 4:09:00 PM

Please excuse hasty congrats - I'm posting before I got logged out again. Many congrats on all your wins : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2011 12:12:00 PM

Congratulation. I liked how you fit in the key at the end.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/12/2011 5:21:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2011 4:19:00 AM

yes to this, judy.. sweet congrats, love! :) huggs!

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2011 3:33:00 AM

hey Judy, congrats on your win ,David

John Freeman

Date: 8/11/2011 10:37:00 PM

Unique idea, judy Agape, Moses

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/11/2011 7:55:00 PM

congrats to you Judy Konos!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/11/2011 7:49:00 PM

Congrats Judy on your top ten sweet success with new form and great poetry luv... enjoy..wow..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2011 7:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Than-Bauk" contest Judy. Love,Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/11/2011 6:34:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest, Judy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/11/2011 12:50:00 PM

extraordianry, judy... hope this places high! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/10/2011 3:38:00 PM

this is too clever Judy.. nice use of new form ..good luck in the contest... hope all is well where u are luv..

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/10/2011 2:00:00 PM

Creative write says so much wihtin the limiting form of Than-Bauk....with love..old Jack

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/10/2011 1:40:00 PM

Hi Judy! I tried too hard to write one of these. I am not very successful! You have a beauty in Goodbye my love! Such a great poetic form and message in your entry. Best of luck. Gwendolen