Goodbye Means Goodbye

GOODBYE MEANS GOODBYE You seem to be still feeling down. Domestic violence decries. You dragging your feet now. It’s time for your spirit to shine. No need to cry. Wipe the tears from your eyes. The melodramatic days you have left behind. You left that man now you want to cry. Is he worth it Boo? Go on with your life. Wipe the tears from yours eyes. Spread your wings and feel alive. The melodramatic days are no longer around. The arguments the volatile environments A struggle known love took over. You got your senses in check. So you left. Wipe your eyes. Leave the crying behind and Ease your mind. You said goodbye. Now live by it. __________________________________________| Written October 17, 2015!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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La France Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Verlena, sadly some stay in horrible situations or go back to them knowing it is wrong, your poem is powerful and speaks of a horrible struggle by many, 7, and I want to thank you so much for my awesome placement in your contest, A Childs First Home, I am honored ~~
Walker  Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 8:46 PM
Thanks Broken Wings for your awesome response. Verlena
Allison Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 6:33 AM
I agree with Michael's comment I hope someone in this position would have the strength to move on after they have escaped from a violent relationship but ties can be so strong and it is easier said than done - a powerful pen Verlena:-) hugs Jan xx 7
Walker  Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 1:53 PM
Thanks Jan for your awesome response. Verlena
Tor Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 6:11 AM
Great Poem Verlena on encouraging to stand by their Goodbye. I hope they take your advice. Unfortunately sometimes someones love is stronger than their common sense. I hope this isn't the case and they listen to you. They have a special friend in you for you to write this valued piece. We have missed you. Welcome back.
Walker  Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 1:54 PM
Thanks Micheal for your super-awesome response. Verlena
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