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Goodbye Hello

bye so long October time to leave you time to fill the air with a newer song time to sing of harvests and thanksgiving time to welcome November hello hi (Double Tetractys with Antonym Diamante elements?)

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Hat Bueckert

Date: 12/2/2022 7:14:00 AM

Lovely and sweet, I like that it feels like a simple goodbye October contains goodbye sun and warm and fall and etc etc. Nicely done!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/2/2022 7:23:00 AM

Thanks Hat. Exactly the feeling I tried to create :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/1/2022 10:00:00 AM

delightful, totally charming ~

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/1/2022 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Line. I appreciate your visit and comment. Linda

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/1/2022 8:23:00 AM

I love this. Well written! :) a Fave

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/1/2022 8:41:00 AM

Oh so many thanks for the visit and fav Heidi. A light, airy cheerio, ciao, salut!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/1/2022 12:30:00 AM

Great poem. we are in November in Malta now and the chill has started.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/1/2022 5:51:00 AM

Nice of you to stop by dear Victor. Yes, a little chill in the mornings here now too. hugs :)

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 10/31/2022 2:07:00 PM

How nicely said and nicely done! Elizabeth

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/31/2022 4:07:00 PM

Thank you Elizabeth. I appreciate your kind comments. :)