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bye so long October time to leave you time to fill the air with a newer song time to sing of harvests and thanksgiving time to welcome November hello hi
(Double Tetractys with Antonym Diamante elements?)

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Date: 12/2/2022 7:14:00 AM
Lovely and sweet, I like that it feels like a simple goodbye October contains goodbye sun and warm and fall and etc etc. Nicely done!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/2/2022 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Hat. Exactly the feeling I tried to create :)
Date: 11/1/2022 10:00:00 AM
delightful, totally charming ~
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/1/2022 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Line. I appreciate your visit and comment. Linda
Date: 11/1/2022 8:23:00 AM
I love this. Well written! :) a Fave
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/1/2022 8:41:00 AM
Oh so many thanks for the visit and fav Heidi. A light, airy cheerio, ciao, salut!
Date: 11/1/2022 12:30:00 AM
Great poem. we are in November in Malta now and the chill has started.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/1/2022 5:51:00 AM
Nice of you to stop by dear Victor. Yes, a little chill in the mornings here now too. hugs :)
Date: 10/31/2022 2:07:00 PM
How nicely said and nicely done! Elizabeth
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/31/2022 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Elizabeth. I appreciate your kind comments. :)