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Goodbye Hello

bye
so long
October
time to leave you
time to fill the air with a newer song
time to sing of harvests and thanksgiving
time to welcome
November
hello
hi

(Double Tetractys with Antonym Diamante elements?)

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Hat Bueckert Date: 12/2/2022 7:14:00 AM Lovely and sweet, I like that it feels like a simple goodbye October contains goodbye sun and warm and fall and etc etc. Nicely done! Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 12/2/2022 7:23:00 AM Thanks Hat. Exactly the feeling I tried to create :)

Line Gauthier Date: 11/1/2022 10:00:00 AM delightful, totally charming ~ Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 11/1/2022 10:27:00 AM Thank you Line. I appreciate your visit and comment. Linda

Heidi Sands Date: 11/1/2022 8:23:00 AM I love this. Well written! :) a Fave Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 11/1/2022 8:41:00 AM Oh so many thanks for the visit and fav Heidi. A light, airy cheerio, ciao, salut!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/1/2022 12:30:00 AM Great poem. we are in November in Malta now and the chill has started. Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 11/1/2022 5:51:00 AM Nice of you to stop by dear Victor. Yes, a little chill in the mornings here now too. hugs :)

Elizabeth Mccann Date: 10/31/2022 2:07:00 PM How nicely said and nicely done! Elizabeth Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/31/2022 4:07:00 PM Thank you Elizabeth. I appreciate your kind comments. :)