Linda Alice Fowler Poet Tetractys

Goodbye Hello

bye
so long
October
time to leave you
time to fill the air with a newer song
time to sing of harvests and thanksgiving
time to welcome
November
hello
hi

(Double Tetractys with Antonym Diamante elements?)

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Hat Bueckert December 2, 2022 at 7:14 AM Lovely and sweet, I like that it feels like a simple goodbye October contains goodbye sun and warm and fall and etc etc. Nicely done! Linda Alice Fowler December 2, 2022 at 7:23 AM Thanks Hat. Exactly the feeling I tried to create :)

Line Gauthier November 1, 2022 at 10:00 AM delightful, totally charming ~ Linda Alice Fowler November 1, 2022 at 10:27 AM Thank you Line. I appreciate your visit and comment. Linda

Heidi Sands November 1, 2022 at 8:23 AM I love this. Well written! :) a Fave Linda Alice Fowler November 1, 2022 at 8:41 AM Oh so many thanks for the visit and fav Heidi. A light, airy cheerio, ciao, salut!

Victor Buhagiar November 1, 2022 at 12:30 AM Great poem. we are in November in Malta now and the chill has started. Linda Alice Fowler November 1, 2022 at 5:51 AM Nice of you to stop by dear Victor. Yes, a little chill in the mornings here now too. hugs :)

Elizabeth Mccann October 31, 2022 at 2:07 PM How nicely said and nicely done! Elizabeth Linda Alice Fowler October 31, 2022 at 4:07 PM Thank you Elizabeth. I appreciate your kind comments. :)