Goodbye and Farewell

Frail boundaries pushed until they pop 
I fall off the fence of protection
Shocked as my readers, but not surprised
With permanent loss of connection!

"Karma's a *****", the battle cry is heard
An apt notion I'm forced to suppose
Tempting fate, you'll eventually fail
To arise with the scent of a rose

Wait a moment, what's this you orate 
I'm not an ejected noodle from the soup?
I guess it's not "goodbye and farewell"
You can just forget all of that poop!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/31/2017 4:45:00 PM
Don't go anywhere!! Write about poop; I like it. I like everything you write so let's stop all this goodbye nonsense. I expect a new Poop poem directly! That's an order!
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Pat Adams
Date: 9/1/2017 3:55:00 PM
Demanding dung? At my age it's called getting lucky! Maybe I can "work up" something, but don't be upset if I just "drop" it!...Poot....I mean.....pat
Date: 8/31/2017 4:25:00 PM
We need more poop on soup so there is no time for goodbye and a loss of connection doesn't stop us from writing!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/1/2017 3:50:00 PM
Thank you so much. Appreciated even more coming from such an advanced poet, so free with her hugs!! Sorry about the tardy answer to these comments. 12 hour swing shifts can be challenging!....pat
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