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Goodbye Stress Tb

the babbling brook
so cold took breath
dropped book in shock

fish nibbling toes
away goes stress
I doze on bank

penned 28 January 2019

than-bauk contest sponsored by Charles Messina

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2019 3:24:00 PM

oh yeuk I couldn't have them near my tootsies lol:-) made me smile Seren, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 2/11/2019 7:48:00 AM

Seren, I never had a fish nibble my toes before, but I can imagine it would tickle lol. I love this. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Charlie

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/12/2019 4:20:00 AM

nor me Charlie but it sounded ok to me. then I found out its banned now cos of infections ...Seren

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/11/2019 6:10:00 AM

Doesn't it feel wonderful to have those little fish nibbling at your toes, Seren? How lovely this is. Congratulations on your win in Charlie's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/12/2019 4:18:00 AM

thanks Carolyn... it is banned now cos of diseases it caused lol