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You left us on the Fourth of July Now my heart is filled with unexpected pain I remember when you would say to look at the sky To find the moon, now that is on memory lane. You would sing us the sweetest lullaby Even though you were far away And simple phone call to pacify The miles traveled in a day But ever since the day you've been gone, I've succeeded in many things you'd be proud of It has been so hard for us to move on I just keep thinking of you up above No matter the miles that keep is apart You will forever and always be in my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 4/16/2016 4:57:00 PM
Gabrielle Caudill, Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/12/2015 10:19:00 AM
Congrats on your win Gabrielle. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Date: 3/18/2015 10:52:00 PM
Gabrielle, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/18/2015 5:35:00 PM
Aw. I love this poem, and can really relate, since my grandma lives far away. Really sweet, and full of love. I like the way you continue to live life, as if they were still there to see all what you've done. Very touching. Keep up the good work!
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Date: 3/18/2015 12:43:00 AM
A sad but beautiful poem of dedication and love is seen here. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 3/17/2015 9:44:00 PM
Gabrielle, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/17/2015 6:46:00 PM
Dear Gabrielle: Good read. Good write. I feel your feelings. Sad but that's life: bitter yet sweet. All the best then, Leon.
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Gabrielle Caudill
Date: 3/17/2015 6:52:00 PM
thank you!