Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

Goodbye

Leafs fall
Fall leaves
Snow cascades
Fairy tail dreams of virgin white
Winter leaves me
To spring raindrops
They wash me away
The summer heat torments and burns
Fall arrives by the wind
The wind takes me away
I leave

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Sheri Fresonke Harper November 3, 2014 at 10:25 PM Aw, sounds like you are lost from summer, we too had cold recently in Florida no less, you paint the picture well, Arthur

Paul Callus October 31, 2014 at 12:55 PM Hi Arthur! That's how life's cycle turns...we pass through all the seasons of our life, till finally we are taken away, like leaves carried off by the wind. // paul Arthur Vaso October 31, 2014 at 5:30 PM Thanks Paul, hope all is well with you.

Maurice Yvonne October 29, 2014 at 1:40 AM Just a brilliant take on the seasons and really life in general. Arthur Vaso October 31, 2014 at 5:29 PM Thank you kindly Maurice, you are a prince and a gentleman.

Liam Mcdaid October 24, 2014 at 8:23 PM love how you drew this arthur excellent pen Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 12:21 AM Thank you kindly liam!

Casarah Nance October 24, 2014 at 2:35 PM Wow baby, I have been missing you... let me be the ground where your leaves rest, let me be the air that you breath best, Let me take you away where there is no goodbyes, let there be light in your winter chilled eyes. Really do miss ya Sugar. Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 12:21 AM Thanks Cas, I hope to be more fully here soon, and I look forward to catching up with all of you!!!

Timothy Hicks October 20, 2014 at 11:12 PM There's a really nice flow and cadence to this one. As the seasons come and go you're the last one to leave... most intriguing! Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 12:20 AM Or the first

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 20, 2014 at 10:32 AM :) rebirth must always be.. :) Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 12:20 AM Thanks Olive :) hugs

Pandita Sietesantos October 19, 2014 at 6:38 PM The imagery is just so amazing! Arthur, I love this wonderful piece! Excellent write, my friend! Pandita Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 12:19 AM Thank you Pandita, very kind!

Tim Smith October 19, 2014 at 8:24 AM Round and round....you will come back Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 12:18 AM Hopefully soon, thanks!

Jerry T Curtis October 19, 2014 at 6:53 AM Don't Leaf----life has many twist and Burns---along it's Win-ding road, but Snow one thing My Fall, it's the reason for the seasons and there is always time to Spring back Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 12:18 AM LOL Jerry, just for that witty comment I will stick around for a wee bit! Thanks!

Eileen Manassian October 19, 2014 at 5:35 AM WOW! You've come full circle, my dear...How very intriguing! :) Loved this. Hugs Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 12:16 AM I can do circles, squares and triangles!!!!! hugs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 19, 2014 at 2:07 AM Beautiful write Arthur! I hv never liked goodbyes but that too is a way of life! Arthur Vaso October 26, 2014 at 12:16 AM Sadly yes, thanks for the lovely praise!