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Skies whisper: till then Hands and trees begin to sigh Summer love; goodbye...

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Date: 12/3/2015 1:18:00 AM
Jessica, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT
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Date: 5/31/2011 11:49:00 AM
Nicely said. & Honestly told.
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:34:00 PM
Short, succinct. Flawless
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:14:00 AM
Jessica a brilliant haiku, congrats on your win as well :) Wilma
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Date: 9/2/2010 12:34:00 PM
Lovely Haiku Jessica, many congrats on your win in the contest >> James
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Date: 9/2/2010 8:30:00 AM
beautiful, congrats on your win
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Date: 9/2/2010 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jessica in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:44:00 PM
aaah, beautiful as the first time I read it. congats, Jessica.
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:50:00 PM
Congratul;ations on the win for summer contest, Jessica
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:55:00 PM
Jessica! Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:12:00 PM
Congrats Jessica on your win in the Summer Haiku contest.. awesome words my friend.. enjoy a special victory..luv.. did u see my wedding photos posted on my blog? new system only allows ten so ten are on there out of the hundreds we took..luv.. enjoy..
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Date: 8/20/2010 12:31:00 AM
Summer will be back though! You made me visualize autumn and the final goodbye nature gives towards God. I love it. Love, Sami.
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:36:00 AM
hot summers do often times bring hot lovers. unfortunately like hot summers hot lovers have to go. good write.
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Date: 8/13/2010 9:11:00 PM
AAAAh, so wistful and romantic. LUv it!!!!
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Date: 8/13/2010 1:53:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this great one..Reads like winners'' circle to me..Sara
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Date: 8/13/2010 11:04:00 AM
The best to you Jessica in the contest. Excellent haiku on summer leaving. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2010 10:12:00 AM
Smile ~ "Yes." ~ And sometimes just as the Summers days must surely come to a close; so does love upon the winds of what once was....Very touching and profound thought of loves passing "Dear Gifted & Lovely Jessica Arteaga" ~ And may the falls vibrant and brilliant colours, forever bless "Your Precious Heart & Soul," beyond the days of A Summers Love ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & Yours," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Dear, 'Filled With The Rainbows of Love;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/13/2010 9:56:00 AM
The close of summer brings an end to many things, Jessica. I was very moved by this haiku about the end of summer love. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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