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Goodbye

Skies whisper: till then
Hands and trees begin to sigh
Summer love; goodbye...

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Skat A

Date: 12/3/2015 1:18:00 AM

Jessica, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT

Ashley Plotczyk

Date: 5/31/2011 11:49:00 AM

Nicely said. & Honestly told.

John Allen

Date: 5/5/2011 11:34:00 PM

Short, succinct. Flawless

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/10/2010 4:14:00 AM

Jessica a brilliant haiku, congrats on your win as well :) Wilma

James Fraser

Date: 9/2/2010 12:34:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Jessica, many congrats on your win in the contest >> James

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/2/2010 8:30:00 AM

beautiful, congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2010 4:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jessica in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2010 9:44:00 PM

aaah, beautiful as the first time I read it. congats, Jessica.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2010 6:50:00 PM

Congratul;ations on the win for summer contest, Jessica

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2010 5:55:00 PM

Jessica! Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2010 5:12:00 PM

Congrats Jessica on your win in the Summer Haiku contest.. awesome words my friend.. enjoy a special victory..luv.. did u see my wedding photos posted on my blog? new system only allows ten so ten are on there out of the hundreds we took..luv.. enjoy..

Sami Al-Khalili

Date: 8/20/2010 12:31:00 AM

Summer will be back though! You made me visualize autumn and the final goodbye nature gives towards God. I love it. Love, Sami.

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 8/14/2010 11:36:00 AM

hot summers do often times bring hot lovers. unfortunately like hot summers hot lovers have to go. good write.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2010 9:11:00 PM

AAAAh, so wistful and romantic. LUv it!!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/13/2010 1:53:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this great one..Reads like winners'' circle to me..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/13/2010 11:04:00 AM

The best to you Jessica in the contest. Excellent haiku on summer leaving. Love, Carol

John Rhinem

Date: 8/13/2010 10:12:00 AM

Smile ~ "Yes." ~ And sometimes just as the Summers days must surely come to a close; so does love upon the winds of what once was....Very touching and profound thought of loves passing "Dear Gifted & Lovely Jessica Arteaga" ~ And may the falls vibrant and brilliant colours, forever bless "Your Precious Heart & Soul," beyond the days of A Summers Love ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & Yours," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Dear, 'Filled With The Rainbows of Love;'" Bye!:) ~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/13/2010 9:56:00 AM

The close of summer brings an end to many things, Jessica. I was very moved by this haiku about the end of summer love. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

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