Goodbye

Skies whisper: till then
Hands and trees begin to sigh
Summer love; goodbye...
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A  Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 1:18 AM
Jessica, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT
Plotczyk Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 11:49 AM
Nicely said. & Honestly told.
Allen Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 11:34 PM
Short, succinct. Flawless
Neels Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 4:14 AM
Jessica a brilliant haiku, congrats on your win as well :) Wilma
Fraser Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 12:34 PM
Lovely Haiku Jessica, many congrats on your win in the contest >> James
Roberts Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 8:30 AM
beautiful, congrats on your win
Brown Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 4:18 AM
Congratulations on your win Jessica in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 9:44 PM
aaah, beautiful as the first time I read it. congats, Jessica.
Mehta Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Congratul;ations on the win for summer contest, Jessica
A  Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:55 PM
Jessica! Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT
Sweetheart Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:12 PM
Congrats Jessica on your win in the Summer Haiku contest.. awesome words my friend.. enjoy a special victory..luv.. did u see my wedding photos posted on my blog? new system only allows ten so ten are on there out of the hundreds we took..luv.. enjoy..
Al-Khalili Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 12:31 AM
Summer will be back though! You made me visualize autumn and the final goodbye nature gives towards God. I love it. Love, Sami.
Cobb Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 11:36 AM
hot summers do often times bring hot lovers. unfortunately like hot summers hot lovers have to go. good write.
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 9:11 PM
AAAAh, so wistful and romantic. LUv it!!!!
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Good luck in the contest with this great one..Reads like winners'' circle to me..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 11:04 AM
The best to you Jessica in the contest. Excellent haiku on summer leaving. Love, Carol
Rhinem Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 10:12 AM
Smile ~ "Yes." ~ And sometimes just as the Summers days must surely come to a close; so does love upon the winds of what once was....Very touching and profound thought of loves passing "Dear Gifted & Lovely Jessica Arteaga" ~ And may the falls vibrant and brilliant colours, forever bless "Your Precious Heart & Soul," beyond the days of A Summers Love ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & Yours," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Dear, 'Filled With The Rainbows of Love;'" Bye!:) ~
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August 13, 2010 at 9:56 AM
The close of summer brings an end to many things, Jessica. I was very moved by this haiku about the end of summer love. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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