Goodbye - Collaboration

You didn't even wait for my reply
 Or for me to even ask why 
 When you left a teardrop and a sigh
 With the note you left that said goodbye

 I'm left with just the memories
 Of how things used to be 
 Of moonlit walks beneath the stars 
 And early morning strolls by the sea 

               I think you had to know before I left 
               pearlescent love had somehow turned to gray.
               Although I knew that you would feel bereft,
               the joy had slipped away; I could not stay.

               Those memories, like a red rose pressed
               between a keepsake’s pages, cannot die.
               Bliss fades, but I’ll recall when love was best 
               from time to time, and I too, Dear, shall cry


For the the "I Shall Collaborate With You Contest of James Edward Lee Sr.
Written with a cool collaborator!
Now that the contest is judged, I will say who my collaborator is: JOSEPH MAY

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/12/2018 8:39:00 PM
Very successful collaboration. Great outcome. Congrats.
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Date: 12/1/2017 7:08:00 AM
Wow! I remember reading this one on Joseph's page and sure enough it is a winner, congratulations to both of you, Andrea and Joseph:)
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Date: 12/1/2017 12:36:00 AM
Congratulations to both of you on a great winning entry! : )
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Date: 11/30/2017 11:42:00 PM
Together you two did a great job, Andrea. Awesome poem. Congratulations to both of you.
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Date: 11/30/2017 10:53:00 PM
wonderful write, Andrea & Joseph, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/30/2017 9:41:00 PM
Congrats! on your placement in my contest lovely write, James
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Date: 11/24/2017 6:37:00 PM
Nicely done.... congratulations
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Date: 11/24/2017 6:53:00 AM
Both people had their reason why, but both people were left to cry; a high price for life was paid, but memories of love will never fade. John
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Date: 11/23/2017 11:36:00 PM
So very good, I love the emotion and the delivery. I wish our collaboration from months ago hadn't fallen thru the cracks! This is truly beautiful. I'm sure it'll rock in the contest. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 11/23/2017 9:08:00 PM
Beautiful collab, and a moving poem.
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Date: 11/23/2017 7:51:00 PM
Hi Andrea, glad to see you posted it..hugs
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Date: 11/23/2017 4:52:00 PM
Well said..a goodbye well depicted..your poem flows well Andrea.. best for a win!
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