Goodby Summer

Summer is going

In time leaves will be falling

rakes will be coming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/2/2010 12:27:00 PM
Great capture of the seasonal change Ralph, many congrats in the contest >> James
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Date: 9/2/2010 8:28:00 AM
nice one, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/2/2010 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Ralph in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:42:00 PM
Cute one, Ralph. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/1/2010 7:40:00 PM
That is the way it is. congratulaitons Ralph. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:43:00 PM
Congratulations on this win for a nice haiku, Ralph
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:47:00 PM
Ralph! Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:09:00 PM
Super congrats Ralph on your big win in the Summer Haiku contest... awesome words my friend.. enjoy another big win..luv..
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:35:00 PM
Hey, this one is really nice. For the summer contest? LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/14/2010 6:06:00 PM
Hey my friend you're getting good at these Haiku's.....Larry
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Date: 8/14/2010 4:42:00 AM
A nice pen picture of the change of seasons, Ralph
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Date: 8/13/2010 12:21:00 PM
If you live up North, this is certainly true, Ralph. Raking seems to be such a thankless job. As soon as you rake, more leaves cover the ground. Very nice reflection on the end of summer and best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/13/2010 11:34:00 AM
I cant wait for summer, so I can kiss winter goodbye. :) Enjoyed your haiku, all the best for the contest, love Wilma
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