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Goodby Summer

Summer is going

In time leaves will be falling

rakes will be coming

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James Fraser

September 2, 2010 at 12:27 PM

Great capture of the seasonal change Ralph, many congrats in the contest >> James

Francine Roberts

September 2, 2010 at 8:28 AM

nice one, congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 2, 2010 at 4:16 AM

Congratulations on your win Ralph in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

September 1, 2010 at 9:42 PM

Cute one, Ralph. Congratulations.

Joyce Johnson

September 1, 2010 at 7:40 PM

That is the way it is. congratulaitons Ralph. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 1, 2010 at 6:43 PM

Congratulations on this win for a nice haiku, Ralph

Skat A

September 1, 2010 at 5:47 PM

Ralph! Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 1, 2010 at 5:09 PM

Super congrats Ralph on your big win in the Summer Haiku contest... awesome words my friend.. enjoy another big win..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2010 at 8:35 PM

Hey, this one is really nice. For the summer contest? LUv, Andrea

Larry Belt

August 14, 2010 at 6:06 PM

Hey my friend you're getting good at these Haiku's.....Larry

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 14, 2010 at 4:42 AM

A nice pen picture of the change of seasons, Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

August 13, 2010 at 12:21 PM

If you live up North, this is certainly true, Ralph. Raking seems to be such a thankless job. As soon as you rake, more leaves cover the ground. Very nice reflection on the end of summer and best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn